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Rouge Summations ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Myuki Len Raigyo Nickname: The Goblin King
Age: Unknown [presumably, seventeen] Birthdate: June 3 Gender: Male
Height: Excuse me? Weight: Well, I never!
Nindo: "Like the little trinket you are... " Personality: Myuki is the self-proclaimed, Goblin King. He's mischievous, dishonest and volatile. The only thing, Myuki loves more than a good prank is himself. Incredibly vain; In his own eyes, Myuki is the fairest in all the land. And would kill to prove it. Village: Kirigakure Rank: Genin Main Class: Genjutsu Subclass: Samurai ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Raigyo
Chakra Pool: 45 Chakra Element: Water and Wind Chakra Color: Pink Chakra Materialization: Koi Fish
Strengths: • Genjutsu • Ranged Combat Weaknesses: • Close Range Combat • Doujutsu Fears: • Growing Old • Looking Like You
Class Attributes: • Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased. • Meager Muscle: Physical endurance slightly increased Reductions: • Learn genjutsu one [1] post faster. • --- Personal Attributes: • Natural Seduction: Hostility towards, Myuki his slightly decreased • Specialist: Learns Bukijutsu one [1] post faster ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 08 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bow Weapon Range: Mid - Long Weapon Weight: 9lb Weapon Location: Horizontal across lower back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 25x Arrows • 5x Bomb Tags
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Bloodline •
Suiton •
Fuuton •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Kyoukan Ya • Stage One [1] ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ TBA
Well, your chakra is wrong. Your main class, genjutsu at the genin level, determines how much chakra you start off with and the Samurai genin level should say how much more you get.
And we do accept that your character can naturally learn bukijutsu one post faster, but could you be a little more specific as to why just to be on the safe side? Like maybe not just say specialist, but be a little more detailed?
If you don't want to be more detailed, then I guess that's fine.
But just add up your chakra pool right and then you'll be accepted, I guess.
Oh, and he can't really be a goblin. I don't think those ever existed in Naruto and we've only accepted humans unless their bloodline dictates otherwise (like the Oni bloodline).
Other than that, everything seems fine.
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:22 am
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Age: 16 Birthdate: June 8th Gender: Male
Height: 5' 9" Weight: 150 lbs
Nindo: "I will be the one that lives forever. Just try to stop me." Personality: At different times, Toby can act like any normal 16 year old. However, due to his father telling him tales of his bloodline abilities, Toby can be kind of cocky and almost sadistic at times. He's always been good with thinking on his feet, and that shows in spars the most. While Toby is nice for the most part, get on his bad side and he'll want to steal your heart.
Village: Kumogakure Rank:Genin Main Class: Bukijutsu Subclass: Sensor
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 260 Chakra Element: Suiton Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Materialization: Liquid like substance
Strengths: • Bukijutsu • Quick Thinker Weaknesses: • To cocky sometimes • Long range fighting Fears: • Spiders • Being without a weapon.
Class Attributes: • Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess. • Scout: Able to detect chakra from living sources within a 60 yard radius. Bloodline Attributes: • Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement. • Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time. • Jiongu users have deep chakra pools. ( Chakra pool maximum +40. ) Reductions: • Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster. • Jiongu users learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. Personal Attributes: • Strong Blood: Learn Bloodline one [1] post faster. • Pickpocket: Get's 100 ryo from a mission no matter what. Adds onto other ryo. IE. If a Mission gives 100 Ryo to begin with, Toby gets 200 Ryo.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 05 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 04 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Sword Weapon Range: Two and a half feet plus arm reach. Total Three and a half feet. Weapon Weight: Three pounds Weapon Location: Right Hip
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x15 • Shuriken x10 • Windmill Shuriken x5
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
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Jiongu •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Kiss of Flesh and Steel • Stage One
Sobagai Deba Sentou • Stage One
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Toby wasn't born in Kumo. In fact, the parents that brought him there weren't his real parents. Both his biological mother and father were born in Takigakure and moved when Toby was born. Living in a small village, Toby's dad did a good job at hiding his bloodline from the villagers. He knew that not everyone understood the Jiongu bloodline and feared they might hurt his son. Bedtime stories usually consisted of the greatness that came with being on the Jiongu bloodline. Tales were spun of members who were strong enough living for hundred of years. With the same stories being told over and over, Toby eventually wanted to learn his father's ways and live forever.
However, when Toby's bloodline abilities first showed themselves, he wasn't at home and the whole village saw what he could do. That night, the villagers gathered outside the door to Toby's house. His father told his mother to take Toby and run. Holding off the villagers, Toby and his mother escaped. Meeting a couple on the road, they said they were heading back home to Kumo. Toby's mother asked if they would take him and raise him as their own, and they agreed. From that point on, Toby kept his bloodline a secret...for the most part. With some of the areas where his body splits being shown, he just told people they were fancy tattoos. He hopes to become a great ninja and live forever.
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Age: 16 Birthdate: April 18 Gender: Male
Height: 5'11 ( 180.34 cm ) Weight: 156 pounds ( 70.76 kg )
Nindo: " English ********, do you speak it?" Personality: Like his nindo suggests, Axel is a very violent person. He is one that loses his cool fast, and itches to start combat even faster, but regardless of this he is a very honorable man. He is someone that strives to get what he wants as fast as possible, and is very well informed in what's what and who's who in the village. Around his allies Axel is more chilled out, less abrasive, more compasionate, and even has a hint of a romantic side for the ladies, using the extent of his Kekkei Genkai to win them over.
Village: Kiri Rank: Genin Main Class: Bukijutsu Subclass: Samurai ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Origami no Dara
Chakra Pool: 240 Chakra Element: Suiton, Fuuton Chakra Color: White Chakra Materialization: Sabertooth's head around Axel's body whenever he uses a jutsu/technique one rank above his own, or when he uses any jutsu A+
Strengths: • Swordplay • Paper Jutsu
Weaknesses: • Katon • Raiton
Fears: • Becoming Weak • Dying outside of battle
Class Attributes: • Fair Mind: Ability to detect genjutsu slightly increased. • Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess Reductions:
• Learns Bukijutsu one post faster •
Personal Attributes: • Three [ 3 ] Extra Jutsu • twenty [ 20 ] extra chakra points.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0両 AC: 0 Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Weapon Range: Weapon Weight: Weapon Location: •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • kunai x 30 •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Fuuton •
Origami •
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Tetsu no Ryu • Stage: 0 / Techniques: 0
Hakyoku-ken no Kata • Stage: 0 / techniques: 0
Kiss of Flesh and Steel • Stage: 0 / techniques: 0
Shigure Souen • Stage: 0 / techniques: 0
Seven Sword Dance • Stage: 0 / techniques: 0
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Axel was born into Kirigakure by a long line of paper jutsu users, all of them excelling in a different branch of combat. Him and his brother were samurai by excellency, skilled in all things weapon jutsu. His brother and himself where polar opposites. His brother was a soft spoken humble man, Axel was everything but, abrasive and arrogant, ever since they where young and the death of his brother put a heavy toll on the man, he now not only had to carry the Storn family name, but he also had to make sure to represent both him, and his brother, and he sought after the one weapon he knew would help him do so; the Kubikiribōchō
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Age: Fourteen. Birthdate: January 24th. Gender: Male.
Height: 5'11. Weight: 160 lbs.
Nindo: "Life is precious." Personality: Calm, friendly, yet very self conscience.
Village: Village Hidden in the Sand. Rank: Genin. Main Class: Ninjutsu. Subclass: Puppeteer.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu.
Chakra Pool: 270. Chakra Element: Wind. Chakra Color: Dark Red. Chakra Materialization: Aura. Strengths: • Ninjutsu. • Quick thinking. Weaknesses: • Self Confidence. • Long Ranged Combat. Fears: • Spiders. • Gross insects.
Class Attributes:
• Ninjutsu limit of this class split amongst elements. • Class Attribute - Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra. Reductions: • • Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • Personal Attributes: • Advanced Puppeteering - Through much use of Kugutsu, Kaito learned how to save chakra while manipulating puppets. Saves 50% chakra for each action used. • Kugutsu Knowledge - Can learn Kugutsu or anything that involves puppetry 1 post faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 Zero. AC: Zero.
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Kugutsu : : 07 / 00 • Ninjutsu : : 08 / 00 • Genjutsu : : 01 / 00 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Small Katana. Weapon Range: The handle is about six inches, the actual blade is about ten inches. Weapon Weight: 4 lbs. Weapon Location: Back, or side.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 30 Kunai.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton} •
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ As a young child, Kaito was adopted by an elderly man who secretly practiced in arts that altered ones body. The man then proceeded to test these crazy methods on the boy at a young age, which came about him learning the Jiongu Method. His body now ravaged by this strange bloodline, Kaito escaped to the village Hidden in the Sand, where he now planned on beginning a new life.
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Age: 16 Birthdate: August 8 Gender: Male
Height: 5'11" l Five Feet, Eleven Inches Weight: 146 lbs. | One Hundred and Forty Six Pounds
Nindo: "Keep moving forward." Personality: Find out for yourself.
Village: What village is most active? Other than Kirigakure Rank: Genin Main Class: Ninjutsu Subclass: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 310 Chakra Color: Crimson Chakra Elements: In Hearts
Strengths: • Ninjutsu • His Kekkei Genkai • Quick Reflexes • Quick Reactions • Combat Weaknesses: • Over thinking • Can be a bit too confident at times Fears: • Being alone • Failure
Class Attributes: • Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra. • Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased. • Ninjutsu limit of this class split amongst elements. Bloodline Attributes: • Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement. • Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time. Personal Attributes: • Vast Secret Reserve: Hidden reserve of [600] chakra. Only uses when he has ran out of his main supply. • Strong Mind: Unable to be affected by Genjutsu
Reductions: • Learn Ninjutsu one [2] post faster. • Learn Bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 6 Per Element + 8 Per Heart + 2 Free Choice • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Tantō Weapon Range: 8 inches Weapon Weight: 2 lbs Weapon Location: Inside right arm The blade is made of a unique conductive, titanium like substance making channelling chakra through it easier.
Summoning Type: N/A Summon Sage: No Pacts: N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x14 • Shuriken x13 • Windmill Shuriken x3 • Antidote • Poison • Explosive Tags x10 • Sleeping Gas Bomb • Military Rations Pills • Small Jar of Sand • Makibishi • Eye Scope • Goggles ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] • • • • • •
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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Life in Takigakure Growing up, Kin was a child who caused trouble for his family and Takigakure. Because he was so strong he felt as though he could do anything he wanted, everywhere he went something bad would happen. This started to make his clan members look bad, something some of them didn't want again. The only person that ever showed him love and cared about him was his mother. She would encourage him to try harder to make friends and would scold him when he got in trouble. He feared his father, because he would tease, tortured, and yelled at him about he how he hated having a son. He never received any form of affection from his father.
When Kin was twelve years old, his mother passed away while on a mission. Once he found out he was devastated. The death of his mother drove him into a deep depression and he was unable to perform difficult tasks. When he was sent on an important mission, his team failed and as punishment, he was treated harshly and thrown into a prison.
By the age of fourteen, he was over his mother's death. He continued trying to make friends like his mother said and continued causing trouble in the process. One night when Kin was called to a council meeting, he was told that to keep the village safe, he was being sold as a slave. Objecting to this decision, he ran to his father for help where he found out that it was his father's idea to sell him in the first place.
Before leaving the village, he went on a rampage. He single handily took the hearts of twenty Chunin, four Jounin, and all the hearts of some of his clan members. To make money he sold the hearts to the black market. People from the village tried to hunt him down, but they all failed. After a month, the hunt for him was called off.
Life in Sunagakure After running away from Takigakure, Kin made his way to the Wind Country, but he was lost. In the vast desert he couldn't find any food or water. Sand ninja that were pasting by carried him to Sunagakure, where he remains until today.
Now sixteen years of age, Kin has finally finished the Academy and is on his way to become a Genin. He promises to help protect the village with everything he has.
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Kiri's probably the most active but other villages are beginning to get active with the influx of new members.
• Hate to burst your bubble, but you can only have a combination of projectiles for your inventory. So everything besides kunais, shurrikens, senbon needles, and smoke bombs have to go.
• Your first attribute is denied. It is WAY too much for a personal attribute and quite frankly you could rarely use adjectives like 'vast' without expecting rejection especially when he's starting out as a genin.
• Your second attribute is denied as well. You cannot be outright immune to it. Please make it more reasonable.
• Your Strengths:: Please put a better parameter of 'quick'. For better wording, 'slightly' or 'moderately' is acceptable to modify your traits. These are perks, but they aren't meant to be something overly outrageous.
• For your weapon, keep in mind that it has to be a "simple", "basic" weapon. So it must also be reasonably breakable as it should be "reasonably" durable.
• Finally, an issue with your History. No matter how talented, how 'strong', he is, a section of your history is severely overrated for his starting rank as a genin. Be realistic about his rank or otherwise outright undermine the ranks of others. And because it is apart of your history, an official section in your official profile, I deny it. Please be more reasonable in terms of his being a Genin.
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Posted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 3:58 pm
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![User Image](https://i460.photobucket.com/albums/qq325/Sam2012_2008/Snapshot_8-1.png) ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Kin Tsuneo Nickname: Prodigy of the Jiongu
Age: 16 Birthdate: August 8 Gender: Male
Height: 5'11" l Five Feet, Eleven Inches Weight: 146 lbs. | One Hundred and Forty Six Pounds
Nindo: "Keep moving forward." Personality: Find out for yourself.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin Main Class: Ninjutsu Subclass: Bloodline
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 310 Chakra Color: Crimson Chakra Elements: In Hearts
Strengths: • Ninjutsu • His Kekkei Genkai • Acrobatics and Flexibility • Quick (and precise) Reaction Timing and Movement • Combat Weaknesses: • Over thinking • Can be a bit too confident at times • Making and keeping friends Fears: • Being alone • Failure • Rejection
Class Attributes: • Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra. • Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased. • Ninjutsu limit of this class split amongst elements. Bloodline Attributes: • Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement. • Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim, though this takes a small amount of time. Personal Attributes: • High Defense • Strong Mind: Able to immediately recognize break out of any Genjutsu after [1] post.
Reductions: • Learn Ninjutsu one [2] post faster. • Learn Bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: • Ninjutsu : : 6 Per Element + 8 Per Heart + 2 Free Choice • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Tantō Weapon Range: 8 inches Weapon Weight: 2 lbs Weapon Location: Inside right arm
Summoning Type: N/A Summon Sage: No Pacts: N/A
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x22 • Senbon Needles x4 • Smoke Bombs x4 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Genso Bushin no Jutsu [ Illusion Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] • • • • • •
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Jiongu • • • • • •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Life in Takigakure Growing up, Kin was a child who caused trouble for his family and Takigakure. Because he was so strong he felt as though he could do anything he wanted, everywhere he went something bad would happen. This started to make his clan members look bad, something some of them didn't want again. The only person that ever showed him love and cared about him was his mother. She would encourage him to try harder to make friends and would scold him when he got in trouble. He feared his father, because he would tease, tortured, and yelled at him about he how he hated having a son. He never received any form of affection from his father.
When Kin was twelve years old, his mother passed away while on a mission. Once he found out he was devastated. The death of his mother drove him into a deep depression and he was unable to perform difficult tasks. When he was sent on an important mission, his team failed and as punishment, he was treated harshly and thrown into a prison.
By the age of fourteen, he was over his mother's death. He continued trying to make friends like his mother said and continued causing trouble in the process. One night when Kin was called to a council meeting, he was told that to keep the village safe, he was being sold as a slave. Objecting to this decision, he ran to his father for help where he found out that it was his father's idea to sell him in the first place.
The night before he was being sold away, he escaped from Takigakure. Once the village found out he was missing, they sent ninja to hunt him down and bring him back. After a month of looking for Kin, the hunt for him was called off. Everyone was glad that he was gone, but they had to find a replacement slave.
Life in Sunagakure After running away from Takigakure, Kin made his way to the Wind Country, but he was lost. In the vast desert he couldn't find any food or water. Sand ninja that were pasting by carried him to Sunagakure, where he remains until today.
Now sixteen years of age, Kin has finally finished the Academy and is on his way to become a Genin. He promises to help protect the village with everything he has.
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