So I couldn't help but notice...

[Encarton]

I was not in the agent story... sadness... depression... gloom...
But wait! It must be because I'm such a good agent and sooo secretive that I was clearly too masterful and avoided detection through out the entire story. Mwahahahaha...
*gnashes teeth in amusement*
I think I look quite mad (coo coo in the coconut) with the teeth and soot~
I like it~~  

[TillxGone]

[XD;
I'm sorry.
I shall put you in part two of the story.
>.>
Once I get some grammar lessons....and time....and not type like I'm being partly sleepy.
And some of my writing courage back. ]  

[Penciled C o o k i e]

[cookie.]

DANG STRAIGHT YOU'RE MAKING A PART TWO!
You don't need courage to write, you need a will to get better!
D8<

-can't really write fuhbeanz, so shouldn't be talking-

[cookie.]

 

[TillxGone]

[D:
Then I lack any will to write again.
-Rolls around- ]  

[Meiazure]

Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!
Up above the world so high,

Aw, come on! We don't want Tilly to stress out after writing over 3000 words.

She did a really good job with the first and spent a lot of time on it even though she probably had a lot of other stuff to do in real life. Let's throw a virtual party for Tilly! And also Cookie for writing a shorter but also creative story. biggrin

*pulls a "bouquet" of party balloons into room*

Like a diamond in the sky,
Twinkle twinkle little star,
How I wonder what you are!

 

[TillxGone]

[ emo
My writer's self esteem was wounded today.
I don't deserve a party!
;w;
Anything I write is not worth a party or any words of praise.
It's all just useless words piled together so they can be horribly stabbed at by people later on with high standards on literacy.
It's all useless for me now.
There's no reason to write stories anymore. ]  

[Encarton]

Well I liked the story! And hey, if you get the point across and entertain then who cares about the mistakes that may be in it. They are negligible and can easily be edited!

/inspirational

Hrmm... *munches on brownies*  

[Penciled C o o k i e]

[cookie.]

-collects balloons to create a balloonplane one day-

Well I'm soooorrry I wounded your "writer's esteem",
BUT IT LOOKS LIKE YOU HAVE SOME TOUGHENING UP TO DO, LADY.
The world, not only for writers, is filled with tough critics.
You only need to listen to what you think will make you a better writer.

And besides, all your organs are useless things piled together so that your body can be abused by terrible people later on.
OR SO YOU SAY ANALOGICALLY.

Maybe there's NO REASON FOR YOU TO BREATH ANYMORE, EITHER!

D:<

[cookie.]

 

[TillxGone]

[._.
Youch.
]  

[Penciled C o o k i e]

[cookie.]

Sorry.
I'm in a vent-y mood.
The world loves to save up crud that could be much more easily spread among other people, and then throw it all at me.
It's terrible, but I do what I can.
By yelling at people.

Ho ho.
ho.

[cookie.]

 

[TillxGone]

[._.
It doesn't matter anymore.
I accept the fact that I am some horrible writer who can't keep herself awake when typing a story. ]  

[Penciled C o o k i e]

[cookie.]

YOU HAVEN'T BEEN LISTENING AT ALL TO MY SPIEL ABOUT IMPROVEMENT, HAVEN'T YOU.
-SMACK-

YOU.
IMPROVE.
BY.
WRITING.
MOAR.

WRITE.
MOAR.

[cookie.]

 

[TillxGone]

[; 3;
I lose interest when writing something.
If I try to write more, there's nothing to write about.
Sure, I can start writing the part 2 of that story I made.
Though, I'll just end up falling asleep.

Also, you said I would become a better writer if I only listen to what I think will make me a better writer. You didn't said anything about writing more.
._.
Until now. ]  

[Penciled C o o k i e]

[cookie.]

-sigh-
I'm sure I posted in the contest thread
that better writing comes from experience
and good critique.

[cookie.]

 

[TillxGone]

[-Floats around Contest thread-
;w;
You did.
D:
I am a forgetful child.
-Screams-

D:<
I am seriously frustrated, annoyed, pissed off, and hating myself now.
I really want to like go rant and hurt people now. ]