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PostPosted: Wed Nov 02, 2011 10:46 pm
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Full Name: Alexander Katsumoto
Nickname: Reitō Shin'en No Maebure (Harbinger of the Frozen Abyss)

Age: 18
Birthdate: 3/07
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11"
Weight: 169

Nindo: "I will never be a memory "
Personality:Alex's personality is one of cold ruthlessness. While he is not particularly anti-social, his cold exterior and professional attitude turn people away. Alex is intelligent and respectful to those he deems worthy. Usually those stronger than him. Alex maintains an outwardly professional demeanor, but is loyal and friendly to a select few, and has a dry sense of humor.W ell-spoken and somewhat graceful, Alex is universally calm, collected, and in control. He can be frustrated and caught off his guard, but this rarely happens. He will follow just about any order without question and will kill without mercy and without regret.

Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Bukijutsu
Subclass: bloodline

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Bloodline: Hyouton

Chakra Pool: 220
Chakra Element: Fuuton, Suiton, Hyouton
Chakra Color: Emerald
Chakra Materialization: Ice forms on his body and around him. The air around him also cools significantly.

Strengths:
• Swordplay
• Ice Manipulation

Weaknesses:
• Hand to Hand combat
• Some What Perfectionist

Fears:
• Being Forgotten
• Being Manipulated

Class Attributes:
• Learn bukijutsu one [1] post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster
• Arrogant Skill: Able to wield weapons with slightly advanced prowess.
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.

Reductions:
• Learn bukijutsu Two [2] posts faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster

Personal Attributes:
• Gift of Mars :Can wield two handed weapons with greater ease and mobility.
• Swordsman: Learns Bukijutsu One [1] Post faster

Bloodline Attributes:
• All Hyouton users are capable of performing techniques with a single hand.
• Hyouton ice is very difficult to melt. ( More in [ Hyouton ] technique description. )



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Ryo:00000 両
AC: 00000

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 03
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 03

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Weapon Type: Masamune (see pic )
Weapon Range: Six Feet (seven plus arm reach)
Weapon Weight: 43 lbs
Weapon Location: On his left hip in a modified quick release sheath.


Summoning Type:
Summon Sage:
Pacts:

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• Kunai: 5
• Shuriken: 20
• Fuuma Shurikan 5

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Suiton


Fuuton


Hyouton


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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u


{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

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{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}

{Style name here}
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


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Alex grew up outside of Kirigakure where he grew up in a normal family well normal to him. His father (if he could be called that ) was cold and ruthless. His mother died in childbirth leaving him at the mercy of his father. While his father was indeed cold he was not bad man or unfit in anyway he simply believed that those with the strength to survive earned it. It was not long before he himself picked up this belief and way of thinking. After all like father like son. He found out about his abilities at the age of twelve where he dove headfirst into training. He developed a knack for it. It was also around that time where he first picked up a sword. When his father found out he was for the first time in a long time happy. The two of them trained each and every day and his skill in handling a blade grew to the point where he could stand toe to toe with his father. Upon reaching the determined age he joined the academy but shortly after his father was stricken ill and soon died from the illness. Leaving Alex with the harsh reality that he was alone once again. Yet thanks to his fathers teachings he was prepared and instead of sulking in misery and despair fought hard in his time in the academy and swore to become the greatest swordsman in the history of Kirigakure. He now weilds his fathers sword in remembrance.
 
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 8:49 am
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Limitations: Please list your medical jutsu as well.

Inventory: You may start with 30 projectiles, you currently have listed 25. Please remove the explosive notes as they are not considered projectiles.

Ninjutsu: Please clean up the ninjutsu section. to clarify I mean:
Quote:


Fuuton/b] {Katon, Suiton, Raiton, Doton, Fuuton}


{Other jutsu type's name} Eiseijutsu
can be cleaned to look neater.  

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 8:53 am
iiCrimsonR0se
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Full Name: Daisuke Ryu Higurashi
Nickname: Dai

Age: 15
Birthdate: April 1st
Gender: Male

Height: 5'6
Weight: 123

Nindo: "I will be the best medic nin in the world. Death is not something I cant cure."
Personality: Daisuke is a very optimistic guy and rather playful. However he is rather intelligent even if he masks it with his flirting and carefree attitude. In battle he tries to throw off his opponents by flirting with them or even acting weak but when he feels the need to be serious he changes gears ad becomes cold and calculating. He wants to become a medical ninja to help those around him and also become the best one and become a medical sanin.

Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutusu Class
Subclass: Medical Class

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Chakra Pool: 275
Chakra Element: Wind and Lightning
Chakra Color: Midnight Blue
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Strengths:
• Chakra Control
• Speed
Weaknesses:
• Is a bit lacking in physical strength
• Has a hard time seeing senbon
Fears:
• Not being able to save a comrade
• Failing

Class Attributes:
• Class Attribute - Secret Drop: Backup reserve of [25] chakra.
•Class Attribute - Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster.

Personal Attributes:
• Medical Drive-Learns Eiseijutsu in 1 less post
•Evasive maneuvers- Increased speed.

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero}
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Raiton: : 00 / 06
• Fuuton : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
•Eiseijutsu 00 / 08

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Weapon Type: Twin Blades
Weapon Range: 6 in.
Weapon Weight: 10lb
Weapon Location: on both sides of his hips



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• 10 Kunai
• 10 Shurikan
•10 smoke bombs

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Raiton


Fuuton


Eiseijutsu


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Daisuke was born into a rather strong family. His father was an anbu agent while his mother was a medical ninja in the anbu. He strives to be just like his mom and save people everyday like she does. He started training everyday since he was young and worked hard on his chakra control and worked on perfecting it. When he was in the academy his ninjutsu and genjutsu marks were good while his taijutsu was rather lacking. He managed to focus on making the other two areas outshine his lack of taijutsu and he was able to pass the academy. Now he is a gnein in hopes of joining a team and becoming a medical sanin.
 
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 11:12 am
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 2:50 pm
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I am sorry could you give me an example like the 2nd part i fixed

Oh no problem : D

This is how your limitations should look;

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Raiton: : 00 / 06
• Fuuton : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
•Eiseijutsu 00 / 08

(The numbers on the right indicate how many you are capable of learning at your current rate. So you do not fill in the ones on the left until you train for it. In this case, you leave it at zero. )
 
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:09 pm
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 3:46 pm
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Full Name: Ichi no Senji
Nickname: Ichi or Sen

Age: 16
Birthdate: June 15
Gender: Male

Height: 5'6"
Weight: 152lbs

Nindo: "Dig your own meaning in life!!!"
Personality: Ichi is a rather energetic, carefree, funny, annoying, kind, and caring individual. Unlike others around him, he wants to make things fun and exciting rather than always boring and serious. Ichi also finds it fun to skip out on his duties as a ninja and find ways to annoy the kage and he elderss of his village. But when you threaten his friends and village, Ichi will get very serious. He will also not hesitate to risk his life to save his friends and his fellow villagers.

Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Ninjutsu
Subclass: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Bakuton: Physical Method [ Explosive Release ]

Chakra Pool: [ 250 ] + [ 20 ] + [ 60 ] = [ 310 ]
Chakra Element: Katon [ Fire ] & Doton [ Earth ]
Chakra Color: SunYellow
Chakra Materialization: Comes off of body like a strongly burning fire.

Strengths:
• Close Combat
• Bloodline Techniques
Weaknesses:
• Genjutsu
• Distance Combat
Fears:
• Losing Friends
• Tailed Beast

Class Attributes:
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faste
• Class Attribute - Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased
• Learn Taijutsu one [1] post faster
• Class Attribute #2 - Lower Body Training: Speed slightly increased.
Reductions:
• Slightly Decreased Physical Strength
• Learn Genjutsu [ 2 ] Post Slower
Personal Attributes:
• [ 2 ] Additional Ninjutsu Slots
• Slightly Increased Physical Defense

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Ryo: 両0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 06 / 02 / 02
• Genjutsu : : 01 / 01
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01

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Weapon Type: Sharpened Shovel
Weapon Range: Closer Range
Weapon Weight: 10lbs
Weapon Location: On Back
• Hooked Kunai

Summoning Type: None
Summon Sage: No
Pacts: None

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• 10x Kunai Knives
• 10x Shuriken
• 5x Smoke Bombs
• 5x Flash Bombs

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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Katon - [ Fire ]


Doton - [ Earth ]


Bakuton: Physical Method - [ Explosive ]


▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u

• n/a

▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

N/A
• n/a

▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

N/A
• n/a

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Ichi was born in the village of Iwagakure to whom his father was the younger brother to the former Tsuchikage of the village. After the village began to decline his family decided to leave his birthplace anddecided to move to Konohagakure despite many protesting from other family members. Ichi being only about 3 at the time did not fully understand the situation.

Upon arriving Ichi's father and mother began to fill out the proper paperwork and were hired and ranked as Jounin and Chuunin within the village. His mother being a medical ninja quickly made herself useful in both the village and in the lfrontlines of battle for the village. His father though a bit slower, showed his usefulness as a spy and a guard to the Hokage here and there. Ichi himself was enrolled into the academy and began to excel rather quickly and right away made friends with his straight forward and energetic personality. Though some parents did not trust or like him around their kids because of his birthplace being of Iwagakure.

As time passed Ichi began to show a special trait his father hoped that he would not have. While sparring with another student in Taijutsu, Ichi suddenly released an explosive charge from his hand which burned his fellow student. Right way instructors thought he had used and explosive tag and quickly drew blades at him. He was brought in and both his parents called the office of the kage and the academy's principal. Ichi's father would later explain that though he and his wife did not show signs of the bloodline, Ichi must of have gotten the Bakuton Bloodline from them, which resulted in the sudden blast. Shocked, the kage understood and let the incident slide though Ichi was not allowed to spar with others to avoid injuring others.

A few more years would pass and Ichi would be a late bloomer in the rank of Genin. But overall he is prepare for the life of a Shiniobi and ready to serve his new home of the Hidden Leaf until old age or death.




[[ Got permission to transfer my Chakra Training from my Hyuuga character to this character from Shinsua ]]  
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 4:03 pm
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 4:16 pm
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Full Name: Akura Bashirou
Nickname: Master of Illusions

Age: 16
Birthdate: Oct. 2
Gender: Male

Height: 5'11
Weight: 130 pounds

Nindo: " And then I'll cast my Illusion on the world..."
Personality: Akura is a calm man; always calculating where to strike next. He's usually pretty sweet and romantic, but to reserved and shy to actually do anything about his nature.

Village: Konoha
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Genjutsu
Subclass: Medic

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Chakra Pool: 225 + 25 = 250
Chakra Element: Lightning Water
Chakra Color: Black
Chakra Materialization: When the chakra surges it appears as a flock of crows

Strengths:
• Genjutsu
• Close Combat
Weaknesses:
• Bukijutsu
• Fuuton


Class Attributes:
• Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased.
• Faulty Precision: Accuracy with techniques slightly increased
Reductions:
• - 1 post to learn Genjutsu

Personal Attributes:
• + 3 Genjutsu
• + 1 Taijutsu style


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Ryo: 両 0
AC: 0

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations:
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 11
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00



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▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton: {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

Lightning


Water


Medical


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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

8 Gates
• {Stage progression / techniques learned}


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Not much is known about Akura; the only thing that a certain science about him is that he is not from Konoha; the way he battles and his genjutsu says that he's from Otogakure.

 
PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:36 pm
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Full Name: Takumi Amaya
Nickname: Taku the monkey

Age: 7
Birthdate: Gemini, June 6th
Gender: Male

Height: 4.7 ft
Weight: 99 lbs

Nindo: "The world is in my hands while I hang upside down in a tree."
Personality: Quite shy to people period. But once you get to know him you know he is a childish pervert.

Village: Takigakure
Rank: Genin
Class: Bloodline Class

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Bloodline: Yaen Clan

Chakra Pool: 350
Chakra Color: dark brown
Chakra Element: Raiton and Doton

Strengths:
• Extra hand in combat [ tail ]
• Suiton [ fuels Raiton ]
Weaknesses:
• Suiton [ turns earth to mud ]
• Cookies [ gets distracted ]
Fears:
• Water [ can't swim ]
• People [ he is shy... ]

Attributes:
• Learn Bloodline Techniques [1] Post Faster

Class Attribute:
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased

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Ryo:

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

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• Red collar
• Projectiles are all at 3 [ kunai and shuriken at 5 ]

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Maruton {Start with the following six only}
• Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique]
• Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking]
• Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing]
• Kai [Release]

Doton "The earth is my mother"


Raiton "Don't play with electricity!"


Yaen Clan "The furries of cuteness~"


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▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u

Kanjo


▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u

Doki Yari


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Takumi was born in the Yaen clan, he was praised as a heir to the dying clan heritage. His mother having a goldish slight fur on her, her green eyes so big and youthful compared to his father's blue and smiling eyes. Taku had sisters but once he was born, he was treated like a prince while they pushed off to the side like rags. Taku was only three when his father Jin started to teach him the clan's heritage. His sisters jealous beyond reason decided to kidnap Takumi during the night and throw him away like they were, the eldest sister Yin took him to a waterfall and ran back. The parents were so devastated they made the clan even more secluded from the world, but sooner or later died of heart break when the sisters were murdered by a bandit. Takumi was found by a high class noble women who took the strange kid in, when he turn six he asked to join the academy, the mother nodded. At age seven he graduated on average scores, he was always afraid to stand out or to see anyone. Surprisnly he was the only one of Yaen's clan to be born with ears like a cat and a tail.
 

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 03, 2011 9:56 pm
@iAkura-kun
- Please expand your history. What you have is unacceptable. You MUST have history up to the required amount or more.

- Please add another Reduction please

- Add Eiseijutsu 00 / 08 to your jutsu limitation section please.


@Mintchan
- Takigakure no exist...I'm a bit confused..

- You are using the older profile layout, please use the newer one that is found in the Character Creation Forum.
 
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 12:42 am
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Full Name: Izaya Toryo
Nickname: "Weaver of the Night Sky" | Tori | Izzy

Age: 12
Birthdate: December 25
Gender: Male

Height: 4'5"
Weight: 98 lbs

Nindo: "The pain of dying, the fear of living. Which is truly more frightening?"
Personality: Izaya comes off as cold-hearted at times, but in fact, he just lacks all the emotions that others feel, or better put, he tries to feel these emotions, but fails at every turn. Even though this may be the case, sometimes you may see him laughing with others about something, or simply laughing to himself at a joke only he understands, other times he will just snap, wanting to hurt people around him for no apparent reason. He suffers from Bipolar Disorder, a not so very rare case among those few with his bloodline. The stress of the Sakkakugan has made it nearly impossible for him to ever be at peace, and it is a never ending battle between himself and his other personality, who fights for freedom constantly. It is not that Izaya does not want to make friends, it is just that he doesn't wish to get too close to anyone, only to turn around and hurt them in the end.

Village: Yukigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Genjutsu
Subclass: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Sakkakugan

Chakra Pool: ~245~
Chakra Element: Wind & Water
Chakra Color: Ivory
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Strengths:
• Lack of Strong Emotions
• Ranged Combat/Deception
Weaknesses:
• Frail physicality
• Close Combat
Fears:
• The other him
• All insects

Class Attributes:
• Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased.
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Bloodline Attribute:
• [ Otherworldly Imagery ] Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means
Class Reductions:
• Learn genjutsu one [2] post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
Bloodline Reductions:
• Genjutsu rank D - C cost [5] less chakra to perform
• Genjutsu rank B - A cost [10] less chakra to perform
• Genjutsu rank S cost [20] less chakra to perform
• Kai costs [10] less chakra to perform
• All Sakkakugan owners learn genjutsu [1] post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Weaver: Able to manipulate Genjutsu and reform it at the cost of [5] less chakra points.
• Deception: Genjutsu lasts for an extra post

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Ryo: 両000,000,000
AC: 00

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 09
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01


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• 25 Senbon
• 5 Kunai

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

~Fuuton~


~Suiton~


~Bloodline~



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u






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This is his story so far...

At the age of seven, Izaya had become the most feared member among his family because of his inheritance of the Sakkakugan, which only appeared within a few members of his clans at a time. He had first achieved it when he was in his home one day, arguing with his father about something that he had done. He didn't mean to, but he ended up killing his father right there on the spot. His eyes had activated without warning, casting a deadly Genjutsu around the house that he was unaware of. It was powerful enough to kill both his parents just like that, and he was left to live with his aunt and uncle ever since. At the age of twelve, he decided that he wanted to become a ninja, using his abilities for a better cause instead of wasting his life doing nothing. And so he came to be in The Snow Country.

 

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:28 pm
Jelani564
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Full Name: Izaya Toryo
Nickname: "Weaver of the Night Sky" | Tori | Izzy

Age: 12
Birthdate: December 25
Gender: Male

Height: 4'5"
Weight: 98 lbs

Nindo: "The pain of dying, the fear of living. Which is truly more frightening?"
Personality: Izaya comes off as cold-hearted at times, but in fact, he just lacks all the emotions that others feel, or better put, he tries to feel these emotions, but fails at every turn. Even though this may be the case, sometimes you may see him laughing with others about something, or simply laughing to himself at a joke only he understands, other times he will just snap, wanting to hurt people around him for no apparent reason. He suffers from Bipolar Disorder, a not so very rare case among those few with his bloodline. The stress of the Sakkakugan has made it nearly impossible for him to ever be at peace, and it is a never ending battle between himself and his other personality, who fights for freedom constantly. It is not that Izaya does not want to make friends, it is just that he doesn't wish to get too close to anyone, only to turn around and hurt them in the end.

Village: Yukigakure
Rank: Genin
Main Class: Genjutsu
Subclass: Bloodline

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Bloodline: Sakkakugan

Chakra Pool: ~245~
Chakra Element: Wind & Water
Chakra Color: Ivory
Chakra Materialization: Aura

Strengths:
• Lack of Strong Emotions
• Ranged Combat/Deception
Weaknesses:
• Frail physicality
• Close Combat
Fears:
• The other him
• All insects

Class Attributes:
• Perceiving Mind: Effect of genjutsu rank D and below slightly increased.
• Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased.
Bloodline Attribute:
• [ Otherworldly Imagery ] Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means
Class Reductions:
• Learn genjutsu one [2] post faster.
• Learn bloodline techniques one [1] post faster.
Bloodline Reductions:
• Genjutsu rank D - C cost [5] less chakra to perform
• Genjutsu rank B - A cost [10] less chakra to perform
• Genjutsu rank S cost [20] less chakra to perform
• Kai costs [10] less chakra to perform
• All Sakkakugan owners learn genjutsu [1] post faster
Personal Attributes:
• Deception: All Genjutsu used by the user acts as if one rank higher than usual.
• Double Deception: Genjutsu lasts for an extra post

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬
Ryo: 両000,000,000
AC: 00

Missions Complete:
D Rank :: 0
C Rank :: 0
B Rank :: 0
A Rank :: 0
S Rank :: 0

Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info}
• Ninjutsu : : 00 / 06
• Genjutsu : : 00 / 09
• Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
• Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 01


▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬
• 25 Senbon
• 5 Kunai

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬
▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u

Maruton:
• Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ]
• Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ]
• Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ]
• Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ]
• Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ]
• Kai [ Release ]

~Fuuton~


~Suiton~


~Bloodline~



▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u






▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬

This is his story so far...

At the age of seven, Izaya had become the most feared member among his family because of his inheritance of the Sakkakugan, which only appeared within a few members of his clans at a time. He had first achieved it when he was in his home one day, arguing with his father about something that he had done. He didn't mean to, but he ended up killing his father right there on the spot. His eyes had activated without warning, casting a deadly Genjutsu around the house that he was unaware of. It was powerful enough to kill both his parents just like that, and he was left to live with his aunt and uncle ever since. At the age of twelve, he decided that he wanted to become a ninja, using his abilities for a better cause instead of wasting his life doing nothing. And so he came to be in The Snow Country.


BOTH of your attributes are denied. With that class and that bloodline I cannot allow those. It woudl make your character WAY WAY WAY to op.  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:54 pm
Azeiel The Fallen


I don't see anything that screams OP, but let's not dwell on such a tedious matter. I made the necessary edits to the first attribute, but the second one remains as is. If you take his bloodline into consideration, it is quite plausible for him to have that as a Personal attribute.  

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