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 Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:35 pm
(( Let's stop this rp for a moment...I'm making this story weird and weirder...now let's discuss what we can do about it. I'm not happy with what i just wrote...I read it again and again. Looks stupid to me. You got any idea to fix this?))
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:52 pm
(((OOC: I've actually been discussing it with a friend because I've felt really lost in what to do in there...
One problem is you keep making characters like they're multiplying bunnies, hehe... which isn't really a good thing when there's only two people (and one person really just wants to play a single character). Creating tons of characters works well with two people, when both are ready for the responsibility of playing multiple people...
That said, I think you're trying to push this story too fast. Not only that, but the Hero and the Villain should never be played by the same person, unless you're REALLY confident in playing them both (I've done it on occasion, but only because I play evil characters a lot better than heroes).
I think some of your problem is you're boxing yourself into a corner. Umeda is trying to get into the corner, but it's too crowded so he gets pushed back out. At least that's the feel I get.
You need to be patient. RP plots don't suddenly explode overnight and can sometimes takes months (is not years) of RPing before the plot reaches it's point. To me, I really don't like RPs with quick plots because then everyone goes, "Okay, what now?"
You need to really advertise the RP. Try advertising in the forums of Gaia (not just in the guild) and PM those who have their RP likes listings in this guild to see if they're interested.
I've created a lot of RPs that only have 2 or 3 people, and they usually work out just fine... but you can't rush things or else the story falls apart.)))
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Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:13 pm
((Yeah, its my own fault exploding Oiwa's identity ^^' I'll do the advertisment and hopefully that guy who just promise me to join will register to guild forum =_= ))
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:06 am
[I kept my promise...and I don't think you will need that bakeneko. Or do you have something in your mind already? I will create Ichikawa if you don't have anything to do with the cat.]
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:21 am
(( I don't know what to do now. I think I just make my Rp meet it's end..what do you think?))
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:27 am
[My opinion, restart the role play. There are 3 parts you can choose to fix. The Front, Middle, Last. Front, as in where your 3 spirits tell the kodama about them and Oiwa. Middle, as in where Oiwa take over the boy's body. Back, well...I think that Matsuo should just keep his identity a secret and let the hero/kodama to investigate him. Let's wait the kodama user and see what she will say.]
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Posted: Sun Dec 20, 2009 8:30 am
((woah...well, i dont mind restarting it. but it depends on dourden now. and thanks for joining...by the way, arent you busy with ur own boring textbook now? how was it going?))
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