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 Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 3:41 pm
rain drops falling toward the ground
the wind she hears is the only sound
up above, a rainbow high
down below, she starts to cry
thinking the rain will wash away
all the pain she felt today
no one's there for comfort her
she sits alone, away from the world
I wrote this poem (also on my quizilla account) about my life now, and also to my fanfic (which is not up anywhere yet)
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Posted: Tue Aug 07, 2007 12:59 am
it rhymes ^^ although I'm not entirely sure what its about its fun to read
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Posted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:45 am
Storm Waltz it rhymes ^^ although I'm not entirely sure what its about its fun to read i was bored. it was just random, not very good.
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 10:34 am
It's very pretty, like a single star in the night sky. I love how you used rain in your poem. Rain is my favorite kind of weather. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Sat Sep 15, 2007 9:06 pm
Ryoumon It's very pretty, like a single star in the night sky. I love how you used rain in your poem. Rain is my favorite kind of weather. Keep up the good work! thank you fo ryour kind words! it means a lot to me. =D
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