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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:39 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:37 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:41 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:15 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:02 pm
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Okay, I gave up on this one. D:
Let's see, things that I can tell are off: the lips' placement seems weird, the eyes are EW, and the neck has no volume whatsoever. Nor can you really tell what's what. XD; Clothing's just there, need to be more defined, folds, etc. Oh, and the hair was rushed so it's really crappy. >>;
Also, cannot seem to get any inspiration whatsoever for prints. D: I cannot seem to invision a pic with more than 2 or 3 people in it. ><;
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:14 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:28 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:39 pm
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I think it is very impressive the way it is now.
The eyes are very deep and beautiful, although I would suggest either making the upper lid lower or the irises bigger, to give it a more natural feel. Also, the eyebrows could stand to be a little less dark.
I like the way you shaded her nose! That part always gets me. >__< However, the enhanced shading of the nose is contrasting a lot with the lack of shading in her cheeks. I've always had a problem with this: have the nose stand out too much, and the cheeks seeming to be blank canvases. Perhaps add a little highlighting to her cheek bones and darkening the areas under the cheekbones, and the areas above the cheekbones, just slightly.
I think one of my favorite parts of this piece would be the mouth and the details you put into it. It stands out very well, and you even added some nice, subtle texture. As for the placement, I'd move it lower, just a touch.
As for her neck, in women, that vertical bone isn't really that prominent. I'm not too great with necks however, so I can't offer much help.
For the hair and clothes, I can only say this: finish it. ^w^ They look very promising as WIP's.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:40 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:10 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:20 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 8:47 pm
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:56 pm
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