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[Original Art]"You are mine."

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Seijaku_Ishida

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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 4:38 pm


	RP characters, Olivier and Saichiri.

Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 5:20 pm


	Artwork: APPROVED.

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Scar_the_Ishbalian

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Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 1:59 pm


	Awsome!

Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 6:59 pm


	I love it! Well done!

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Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 10:34 pm


	I adore it to pieces. The coloring is so nice. Loooove it

Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 7:57 pm


	That's wonderful, the expressions are really awsome!

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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:30 am


	Hahaha! That's so cool! I love it! Great work!

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:29 pm


	nice works!

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Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 3:18 am


	I like it, but the guy in the back's hand bother me a little bit. I can't quite oput my finger on it. The hand on the shoulder looks fantastic, but the other one's structure throws me off. I like the coloring, the wings look fantastic.

Posted: Fri Jul 28, 2006 7:19 am


	S c h i s m I like it, but the guy in the back's hand bother me a little bit. I can't quite oput my finger on it. The hand on the shoulder looks fantastic, but the other one's structure throws me off. I like the coloring, the wings look fantastic. cough The hand bothered me too, but I had already inked it when I realized it looked kinda...weird. I wish you could pin down specifically what was wrong, though. xd Anyway, thank you very much. This was actually the last place I thought I'd get nice critique.

Seijaku_Ishida

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Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:05 pm


	Seijaku_Ishida S c h i s m I like it, but the guy in the back's hand bother me a little bit. I can't quite oput my finger on it. The hand on the shoulder looks fantastic, but the other one's structure throws me off. I like the coloring, the wings look fantastic. cough The hand bothered me too, but I had already inked it when I realized it looked kinda...weird. I wish you could pin down specifically what was wrong, though. xd Anyway, thank you very much. This was actually the last place I thought I'd get nice critique. Haha :3. I know I like critiques, because they always help you improve and such (and one word comments like "cool" can get annoying). Yeah, I wasn't sure about saying it XD. Since this is just a art/writing forum and such, and I know some people can get really defensive about having their stuff critiqued. And I do that all the time.. Since my sketches are really messy, I don't have a really nice or clean guideline to follow when I ink so sometimes I mess things up real bad >>;.

Posted: Sat Jul 29, 2006 5:11 pm


	Wow, fantastic. The hand on shoulder is good, but the one below it.. the space between the thumb/ nextfinger looks.. odd. It's too big. Other then that, that's pretty damn nifty.