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x__deadsoul

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Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2006 9:12 pm


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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 2:43 pm


	It's actually rather good. It follows all of the rules of modern poetry, as in not suing "like" or "as", but metaphor instead. Lots of desctiption, which is good, And a fairly freeflow feel, not extremly ridgid, not extremly loose. Good job.

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x__deadsoul

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Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2006 8:40 pm


	yays! thanks for the comment 3nodding

Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:16 am


	good jod very well thought out and detailed

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