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Flaring Sunset

PostPosted: Sat Apr 08, 2006 4:37 pm


Fading away in the mist
A girl left behind
A caring heart slashed with a black rose
Bleeding hands in a fallen lake of fire
You could never know her emotions
With the mask she wears
Silent in a corner
Doesn't desire communication
They'll just leaver her
Another broken peice to mend
So emotional she doesn't care
A natural born rebel
She does everything wrong
Save her from the falling lake
The tears of blood burn her face
Mistakes have been made
Results have occured
Wanting to forget this madness
Everything stumbles and finds it's way back
She must abide in a new day
Forbidding relationships to last long journies
Wake her up from this coma
Let her see the ones who truely care.



How do you like it?
PostPosted: Mon Apr 17, 2006 7:52 pm


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Flaring Sunset


grotesquekreeple

PostPosted: Thu May 11, 2006 1:41 am


i like it it reminds me of the times when no one(not even me)could understand them good job and keep writing
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