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right now ,right here write your songs and poems and tell people including me what you think.
here is a song i just found in my dump of a room.
NIGHTMARES
I've fallen into the depths of my dreams
the darkness calls and reality as we know it rips at the seems
(rips at the seems)
Blood,pain,death is in my deepest of dreams
they are nightmares haunting me
(haunting me)
I cry silently til the last tear has fallen
nightmares are haunting me

An angel cries
with broken wings
tears are beaming
blood is streaming......
and .............
when...........
she ...............
dies........
silence ..........
will ...........
ring.............



done...now that's not my best but what do ya'll think of this?
and here is a poem i just found IT SUCKS TOO,but read it plz.

NO TITLE
not even born
protected from the pain,and the sadness of life
so innocent.........
but the sheild has broken
awaken now heart broken,scared,tears on your cheeks,
and fear in your eyes...............
all you have to do is die
then all the pain,sadness,and suffering of the past
will end...............
Forever


done..........what did you think of that piece of crap?once i find the better ones i'll put them up.(they are a lot better)well tell me what you think and then if you can write something of your own.

no it wasn't crapping up anything.it uncrapped my crap,in my opion you did great.keep on writting rosemont419!!!!!!!!!!!!!

biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin biggrin thanks rosemont419 you can write here anytime you want!!!!!and i'm going to tell another song!!!!!this one doesn't even make sense to me.

DARKNESS
if only it were so simple
to cruise through life smelling sweet roses
but the obsticals blaken my vision
so i unwillingly crush them....beneath my feet
..........................................
dreams keep us safe
from the madness
and goals are our finish lines
yet the goals change with every turn
and remain impossible till the end of time
.........................
mastakes are made
they fade
but regrets are everlasting
and blasting
the pain is slowly slowing us down
victories are flashes
sudden and unlasting
but they allow us to glimpse what's ahead
before darkness
de......cends
............................
love is bitter
yet it is the fruit keeping us alive
over and over filling us up
only to starve us because we didn't get e....nough
.......................
the people whom we love shape our destinies
and.....
our.........
strenghts.....
yet they leave us in the dust,the darkness
cold and alone
.........................
others they fight us
trying to win
occasionally we past them
and the bonds forming makes it less lonely
but eventually
we lose each other in the darkness
alone isn't a bad way to be
...................
it'll clear your head and focus you on your
.......journey
.........................
cherish the short time on your journey
that you aren't alone
.................
but...
be prepared..................
to walk.......
in...
darkness.............


DONE!!!!!!!!i know that wasn't great but oh well.
now here is an unfinshed poem.


I SEE
i see the fire in you
burning though your veins
(burning though your veins)
i see the fear that curses you day and night
(day and night)
i see the horizan waiting for you to come
(to come)
but the truth is you don't see
that we're drifting apart
and it's all because you had a strange change in heart
(heart....heart)
i see your pain rushing though your blood
(blood...blood)
but somehow you don't
or you chose not to......
you act as if nothing has happened
when everything is done
just a blink of an eye
and.........
you're.........
gone..........(gone.......gone........)

DONE........ok it might be finished i can telll.but i'll post better ones later.bye-bye for now

Ya i agree the first one is better than the second one,but not all peoms or songs are great.but rosemont419 your new poem is pretty good,i fell it's missing a few words but after u do that i will be able to see this blurry image better.but it was great !!!!!!!!!keep on writing i look forward to reading your thoughts about my work,and i look forward to reading more of yours,hope you write agian on here soon.till then bye or when i write something on here buh-bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

that last post at begaining of the poem after "vioces of fear"is suposed to be "voices of despair" then "voices of hoplessness is all i hear"

pretty good i kinda got an image from that it reminds me of sometime.it's no that crappy it's just difficult to understand really unless well unless your special.


my dad just KILLED MY FAVE.PAIR OF JEAN!!!!!!!!!! crying crying i really liked them, i've had them for two years and still fit them.....i miss thoughs jeans.

the jeans
of my dreams
are now just trash
he went and bashed
them oh man
i'm gonna ban
him from my room
to his forever tomb


that was WEIRD!!!!!!!!!!!!but gotta go the big mummy has awakened.lol(wierd)

wow that was good yakusugy(i hope i spelled that right)i think i'd listen to your band if i could.but don't know how so ..........ya.............keep on writting you can post here any time!!!

okay....i dunno if mine's any good tho.....

Twisted Dreams

I'm sick of all the lies
Just leave me be
I'm dying
Can't you see
I don't want the lies
The false lullabies
I want permanent dreams
Muffle my screams

In my world
It rains blood
Tears from my eyes
Constantly flood
Give me wings
So I can fly
Away from this
False lullaby

Scar the sun
Blot the moon
As I sing
My twisted tune
Rip my hair
Bind my wrists
Tears of blood
Scar my face
Take me from
This darkened place

My sleep
My dreams
My nighttime screams
A reflection
Of reality

I can't stop the bleeding
Tears I dam up
They overflow
Soak up the blood
The tears
All my fears

My twisted dreams