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punkrocker360

 
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 05, 2006 1:18 pm


The Darkness
Will I ever get to see the light of day? Will this sandness go away? The teares I shad make me see that the Darkness is inside of me. Will I see the light of day? Will this sadness fade away. No it won't for you see the darkness grows inside of me.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 11, 2006 2:21 am


It's pretty good. What's missing though is a bit of structure. A very good rhyming pattern and rhythm though :')

.Beautiful. .Freak.

 
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bloody_pixie

 
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 29, 2006 6:17 pm


i like it. its very nice. its something i like.
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