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Deck 40 cards

Monsters 18-
Amazoness Queen x2
Amazoness Tiger x2
Amazoness Paladin x2
Amazoness Swords Woman x2
Amazoness Sage x2
Amazoness Scouts x2
Amazoness Trainee x2
Amazoness Chain Master
Amazoness Fighter
Amazoness Blowpiper
Amazon Archer

Spells 14-
Amazoness Village x2
Amazoness Spellcaster x2
Amazoness Fighting Spirit
Amazoness Heirloom
The A. Forces x2
Burden of the Mighty x2
Mystical Space Typhoon x2
Monster Reborn
Dark Hole

Traps 8-
Amazoness Willpower x2
Trap Stun x2
Mirror Force
Mirror Wall
Horn of Heaven
Black Horn of Heaven

Extra Deck 1-
Black Rose Dragon

6-7 You really should let people contribute advice though. Even if you don't take it.
I love the Amazons.

I am not sure what kind of amazoness deck you want, but in mine Fighting Spirit is a staple. 1000 extra attack power makes them a real challenge to take down. Even with Amazoness Sage they are either gonna have to suicide another 1400 or pull a 2400 out of their a** to take it down. Second I like that you included them all, but some of them really don't help. While chain master has a cool effect she might lose you an amazon and get you some random card that will not benefit from or for any of your other Amazoness cards. my Body as a shield and will come in Handy. Letting you Amazoness ram your opponent without taking damage. You could add Spirit barrier, but it won't be as practical unless you have both of them out at the same idea.
My main suggestion is just focus on your attack power. Get rid of Blowpiper archer, and chain master.
It confuses me why you would run Trainee at 2 and not fighter when you are only running 1 Fighting Spirit.
Unless it's because Trainee is so gosh darn cute.

I won't mess with the s/t too much but my base advice would be
- 1 Chain Master
- 1 Blow piper
- 1 Archer
- 1 or 2 Trainee (only keep if you raise fighting spirit)
- 1 Mirror wall

+ 1 swords Woman
+ 1 fighter
+ 2 fighting spirit
+ 2 Amazoness Archers

Really I would just have 3 of most of the Amazons Tiger, Queen, paladin swords, and fighter. Then 3 Amazoness village. All you need to do with Amazons imo is throw out blowpiper, archer, and chain and focus on the attack aspect, Then just shut down their destruction effects.

well since you're apperently asking for advice "3" is the magic number in this game, you want 3 of your best cards, not 2.

that, and just because it's an amazoness deck, doesn't mean you nedd every amazoness
blowpiper, archer, chain master, and maybe even trainee arn't needed in this deck
Plus amazoness archers (the trap card) is like the card for this deck.