It's pretty good, if I say so myself biggrin The only thing I'm concern would have to be the lineart. It's a bit messy as it's very thick in places (mostly on the hair, and there is a small amount in other places (like the cup).
BTW I love that it is Arthur Kirkland from APH biggrin
Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:56 am
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It's pretty good, if I say so myself biggrin The only thing I'm concern would have to be the lineart. It's a bit messy as it's very thick in places (mostly on the hair, and there is a small amount in other places (like the cup).
BTW I love that it is Arthur Kirkland from APH biggrin
Thank you ( ' w ' ) It looks messy 'cause I don't use photoshop often, and I had to scan it in (-_-) I hate scanners I'm gonna go try to fix it then :3
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 10:26 am
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it's really goood! i think its just that the lines are too thick? i'm an amateur artistsweatdrop
Don't worry, I'm a amateur too, so no need to be formal. I'm going to try to fix him and his...... 'cute' bowl :3
Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 11:12 am
'kay I thinned some of the lines and tried to fix the bowl more :3
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 1:05 pm
added a background :3
Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2010 3:48 pm
It looks good and I really like it~ The linear is cleaner and you added a background and some sort of separation from the background. The only thing I want to add is to not smudge/blur your artwork. Although it might look good at points, it's best to use it wisely. Adding blurs at unneeded places are unnecessary as the artwork would look a bit messy.
Do you use the layer option in photoshop? if not that might help alot to ^_^ because you can try different things without effecting the actual drawing XD
Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 7:09 pm
:3 been awhile since I put something up and everyone has good points
I'm still coloring and tweaking parts I don't like (like the arms and legs) but other then that how does it look?
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Posted: Fri Jun 17, 2011 9:11 pm
never finished the image above this one....but yay new stuff I need to color and re-do the lines a little, feedback is always appreciated :3 (except the mean evil kind, no one likes that kind XD )