I have some grasp on art, reading tutorials, watching youtube vids, reading art concept books, theory books, and a lot of self teaching. I know that from what I am aware of, I need to improve on: anatomy, perspective, light sources, balance and flow of pages, and white space (Or rather- backgrounds).
I appreciate any and all help given. I don't mind hard critiques, so don't feel a need to be evasive. I need honest critique, if you can give that, please do! ^______^
![User Image](https://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h176/RathNythum/nanadebusiren1.jpg)
And in case you are curious, these are my two Siren twins, Nanashi (Right) and Debu (Left). They are supposed to have rooster like attributes, does it look like they do? Their personalities were the part I wanted to depict best here- being that Nanashi is begrudgingly allowing his brother to hang on him, as he makes it abundantly clear he doesn't care for it, his stance, being a bit resistant and even "Stepping Back" in a hope to express this. Debu on the other hand, was intended to look flirtatious and carefree, even allowing his center of gravity to be entrusted to his twin brother. Does it feel like this to you? What's your interpretation?
((This did have a ref. [x] in case you'd like to see what I did. ^_____^ ))