NOTICE!!
I'm compileing the story data later today, the finished story should be up tonight
Also KING would you and the admin staff please not move this untill I have that up!
thanks
your absentee runner of this maddness
~naristar~
I'm compileing the story data later today, the finished story should be up tonight
Also KING would you and the admin staff please not move this untill I have that up!
thanks
your absentee runner of this maddness
~naristar~
Intro:
Since it was so much fun last time I've decided to take up the running of this bit of madness.
1st prize is Aquarium mini Monsters First strike!
2nd and 3rd will be a surprise ninja mrgreen
just to keep things interesting.
RULES!!
Follow Gaia TOS
no more than 4 posts in a row, a day after which you can post only after someone else has posted
please pay attention to the posts proceeding you
Each post can have up 6 words
This game shal last until the thread has reached 30 pages or the 25 of April which ever comes first. (I will finish the story)
The Story(so far):
The Sun was shinning the air was clear. The snow had for the most part melted and spring was close on the heels of winter, promising welcome relief from the bitter cold. It was time for all things that I've done to come to a new begining.
To find love and hope and to erase the scars of the past, and to move toward the future.
I walked on, slowly, to my aunt Carmella's house. An old, slightly dilapidated mansion that the locals insisted was haunted by a woman who killed her children and ate them thinking that it would keep her young and grant her imortality.
But instead it didn't do what it's supposed to do and she died a horrible death from gluttony. Supposedly her fat ghost roams the mansion's rooms but my aunt Carmella hasn't seen her... yet.
But I think there's still a chance that Aunt Carmella might see her after she gets her cataract surgery. Because I've seen her! After all, she's an extremely huge ghost with Diabetes from all the children she ate.
*Childeren that were naughty anyways but truly didn't deserve to be killed!
The Ghost of Aunt Carmella's mansion had been a sociopath in life. It's said she is a hungry walrus that smells like girl scout cookies and peppermint candy that have been soaking in Gin and moonshine for about 10 years, but she has been exaggerated by the imaginations of the locals.
I think she's in denial of what she's done and is looking for her children.
Reaching her front porch, I looked to see if the Ghost was in the window. That's where I saw her last, moaning, but she wasn't there.
The story is being compiled please wait a minute for final incarnation!
Aunt Carmella opened the window to look outside and smiled at me. Her hand beckoning *me to enter through the back door.
I was quite unsure of what I should do next. So I stepped off the porch and went to the back of the house, feeling ghostly eyes watching my progress.
*But, I wasn't really worried. I believe that Ghosts can't actually hurt people. I wondered why my Aunt wanted me to use the back door, because of course she knew I'd always entered through the front door!
My Aunt met me at the back door. She said she'd seen the Ghost!
It was in the upstairs bathroom and refused to leave. It wouldn't have been so bad, if she hadn't been sitting on the commode! I don't know what she thought she was doing; but Aunt Carmella needed to use (use? redundent) the bathroom bad!
The ghost wasn't budging. Aunt Carmella was heading for* the Mall to use the bathroom there. I said I would be going home. But just as Aunt Carmella left, I heard the toilet flush! Oh nooooo... the Ghost was a Poltergeist!
What should I do? Leave as quickly as possible, or get the house blessed (and an air freshener for the bathroom! Poltergeist sure stink!) pg6
*these are words I've added to smooth the story or give context to sentences cuts down on the confusion eh
Players Post count mrgreen
GailAnne Munchkin= 63(leading at the moment)
Rhymes0with0Orange=1
Donniz=1
Cookie1474=10
X-BILLIONdollarAZZ-X=2
zroxtheworld=1
Dusty Golightly=61
iMukuro_mist=4
-iSpizik-=1
Metalic Hermes=1
Master of Grilled Cheese=1
Purtie=55
Straight Talker=4
j3sst3r666=33
Master Ryo Noguchi=12
Violet_Rampage=1
~Running commentary~
WoooT!! the winners are in!!
Prizes will be sent out when I finish compileing the story
so this eveing!!
Good work everyone!!
"YAY for new contibuters!" *claps hands* "sorry for being away Holidays keep us busy but I'm back now so let us commence'
4/8= nice use of language,
