Winner Chosen. Thanks to everyone who participated!

[Fellmaria]

I want to see all of your creativity, so show me what you got. I will be giving feedback on everyone's tektek.

Items to use


~Hootie-Hoo~Fremere's Guard
~silly simple dreamer~Chill of Artemis
~Makoto Tsuru~Fallen Wish
~Torako_Kameyo~Gogh Reed
~yellow lilly~Mercury's Moon


Price: No price limit.

Theme: Whatever suites your item.

Layering:Helps your tektek flow better.

Matching: Is a must! Please, please, PLEASE, do not use sets or just duplicate your item over and over again. I want to see some creativity. Everyone is allowed to use no more then 3 of their item

Prize: Winner may choose to have either a gold prize or item prize. Runners up will receive an item prize for their effort. = )

Top 5 Favorites:

I will post this round's Tektek's next to last round's. The winner will be chosen based on overall quality of both Tektek's, and whether or not they improved from the last round.

1.Hootie-Hoo
2.silly simple dreamer
3.Makoto Tsuru
4.Torako_Kameyo
5.yellow lilly


Submission Deadline: I begin judging when everyone feels that their Tektek is ready to be judged. No rush, just take your time and have fun : )  

[HootiHoo]

 

[Fellmaria]

It's cute, but maybe try a different pair of eyes? I also like to see it with a mouth : )  

[CuddlyDeathPrincess]

 

[Oxygen_Junkie]

is a little bit of red okay? sweatdrop  

[Oxygen_Junkie]

no matter, here it is
(with a ridiculous price tag sweatdrop )


Total Value: 22,959,935 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Gaia-sama
Gold Heart Face Tattoo
Warmth of Apollo
Warmth of Apollo
Noble Plumage
Gold Tribal Right Arm Tattoo
Gold Tribal Left Arm Tattoo
Seracila Pendant 7th Gen.
Seracila Pendant 7th Gen.
Angelic Pendant
Hermes' Moon
Noble Plumage
Oisin's Blessing
Noel's Gift
Tsunami KO Gold Earring
Spartan Queen
Gogh Reed  

[iPa-Pa-Pa-PokerFace]

Total Value: 21,361,112 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Golden Fleece
Noel's Gift 5th Gen.
Seracila Pendant 5th Gen.
Vanilla Buttercream Rose
Gaia-sama
Gaia-sama
SDPlus #99 Kanoko
Noel's Gift
White Tiger Trousers
Prince Patchouli
Golden Wings
Winter Rose  

[Fellmaria]

CuddlyDeathPrincess

I don't see a lot of matching items in this. The Picolitrossos mask has a shade of gold that is way too dark. It's what catches my eye first and it's distracting. Try and do a more monochrome theme or use only two colors like Silver and Blue or silver and white.  

[Fellmaria]

Oxygen_Junkie

no matter, here it is
(with a ridiculous price tag sweatdrop )

Hehe, if you can make it all match and look nice in the end then I don't mind a little or a lot of other colors.

Now, this one seems a little cluttered and uses duplicates of multiple items. I'd try to incorporate lots of small gold/white items or a few big gold/white items. With the style you're going for I might even go as far as to use a gold hair or white hair, same with the eyes.

A beautiful first try though : )  

[Fellmaria]

iPa-Pa-Pa-PokerFace

It's cute, but the only things I'd change would be a lighter maybe more natural pair of eyes, different shoes, and gold petals instead of white.  

[iPa-Pa-Pa-PokerFace]

Edited: heart

Total Value: 10,584,415 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
White Tiger Slippers
Noel's Gift
Golden Fleece
Noel's Gift 5th Gen.
Seracila Pendant 5th Gen.
Gaia-sama
Noel's Gift
White Tiger Trousers
Prince Patchouli
Golden Wings  

[iPa-Pa-Pa-PokerFace]

OMG! I luv ur feedback! The last tektek contest I was in all the feedback was nice try and not my style! It was so frustrating! But i luv how u say what you would do to make it better! whee  

[no one uses bing]

Total Value: 10,260,869 Gold
[Item Information]

Item List:
Fallen Wish 11th Gen.
Snow Witch
Silver Laurels
Angelic Pendant
Angelic Lace
Angelic Lace
Oisin's Blessing
Pixie
Cecil
Gogh Reed  

[Fellmaria]

iPa-Pa-Pa-PokerFace

OMG! I luv ur feedback! The last tektek contest I was in all the feedback was nice try and not my style! It was so frustrating! But i luv how u say what you would do to make it better! whee

Feedback makes a difference. It doesn't help to tell someone that their avi sucks or "not my style" if there are only a few things wrong with it. Even if someone is way off it's better to help them in the right direction rather then just shoot them down before they even get started.

I fav'd your edited avi by the way : ) It looks gorgeous.  

[Fellmaria]

silly simple dreamer

Had to stare at this one for a bit. I think the only things you should change are the eyes, and angelic lace. Also, give her a mouth, a simple smile should suffice.