I suppose this will be my thread then, eh?
Ah well.
Right now I just need crits on two pieces, that would be these:
I'm going to use this as a banner for my art shop. I plan to add more color once I'm finished working things out.
Right now I need help mostly with the hand, as I can't seem to get it right.
If there's anything else wrong with it, please let me know.
Bayonetta. I've been playing a lot of it. Love her. So, I'm drawin' her.
Keep in mind, this is just the sketch that I'm going to paint over later, so details will come later as well, but it's good to have a solid foundation, eh?
Anyway, I feel like something's off, and I want to know what you guys think.
I feel that her torso is a bit stiff, but I don't know how to fix that.
If you guys want to offer crits, redlines, or suggestions on any part of the pic, it's fully welcomed, I just want to get this sketch to be solid before I start painting.
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About Me: I'm 20 (too old for Gaia? Yes. Stubborn as a cow? Yes.), and I work as an art mentor for middle school kids in a non-profit after school program (mentors need mentoring too from time to time, eh?). I'm currently attending college, and I hope to be a comic book illustrator in the future, if not, I'd be perfectly happy as an art teacher. I love teaching art, makes me feel useful. I've been drawing since I've been able to pick up a pencil. That doesn't necessarily make me good at it, but I do have a certain passion for it, so I'm always willing to learn.