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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:43 am
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[ A r T * R e V o L u T i O N ]
I. About the Mentor, Death Faust IX
I've been and will be again a digital arts student of Ateneo de Naga University, in Naga city, Philippines. Right now, I'm just an out of school nobody who's got no work.
Real name's Ken. I prefer people calling me by my name.
II. Help you
I can help you in improving your art style no matter what that is, even if your trying to do the weirdest stuff in arts, I know I can help you improve.
How? I can give you tips regarding color choice, concept and composition.
I can help you improve the quality of your artworks. :"]
I can help you step by step to becoming a better artist.
III. Focus
I focus on digital arts: photo manipulation, digital painting, typography I won't really give much focus on your flaws, I'll go point what you already have and make you improve it.
IV. Mentees
I can accept up to 5 mentees I'm looking for active people to be my mentees I'll remove you in my list if you don't respond to my PMs
1.~FergiGirl~ 2. 3. 4. 5.
V. Requirements
Be able to submit work within the time frame I tell you Write a journal once a week regarding your artistry Follow instructions and submit before deadlines
VI. Links
My gallery: http://ken-sama.deviantart.com AOL: kenesperanza@aol.com YM: ken09b@yahoo.com formspring: http://www.formspring.me/radimirace
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:47 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:31 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:46 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:03 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:23 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:37 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 7:42 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:59 pm
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@Fergi
The art is good You've shown effort in adding details to your work You also showed that you understand the subject, for you've portrayed the king of pentacles well
But there are a few flaws in the composition
I won't judge your art style much, I think you can still improve it. ... are you using 1,2,3 yellow pencils or the H, B, HB ones Read about them, they'll help improve your artwork
There are a lot of stuff in your art work It's good that you placed less detail on the background mountain But I think it would be better to make it steeper and the lake more centered and wider
Having the tree on the left adds something on the composition But the bottom part is kinda awkward and you need to fix the leaves, darken it The peacocks [ birds ] on the tree are kind of merging it's tail with the leaves Make it appear more, add details, make it a little bigger, darken the lines
The cat's kinda cute But it would've been better if you did complete it's body Also the table and the kid [ The kid's kinda awkward, place him somewhere else or don't place him there at all ] Complete the base of the table
The king's clothes are good work on it's detail and I think you need to make his face more expressive [ imagine a kind and generous face ] his body needs to be bigger make him fat or muscular earth and gold are solid elements thus the king needs to compliment it's elements
Also move him closer to the camera thus make him bigger [ I'll advise you go practice anatomy through studying human poses ] Move him to the right more so that the subject is not too centered [ Rule of Thirds... google it, it helps ] [ Also Golden Ratio... it's mathematical stuff, but it helps too ]
I like the lamp it's pole needs to be thicker though and the gate needs to be lower add arrow head tips for the rest the arrow head tips needs to be not much of a triangle but more of a tear shape
Look for reference for those vines
I like how you designed the tea cups and tea pot Their placement on the table needs work to and there's something wrong about the tea pot's handle
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You are now my mentee Congratulations ...
I'll let you work on these first
Submit in order
1. Basic Geometric Shapes and Shading - Cube, Sphere, Cylinder, Cone, Pyramid, Donut - Draw them and shade them, light source on 10:00
2. Complicate Things - Crumpled Paper, Flower, Apple, Tea Cup - Draw them and shade them, light source on 2:00
3. More Detailed work - Land scape, House
4. People - Full body of a character
* work on your style
Perhaps these maybe tedious so I'll let you work on these till 2nd week of February
Submit your journal report in this thread weekly though Just tell how you're doing
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 12:35 am
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 6:29 am
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