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Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 12:38 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:30 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:59 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 5:12 pm
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Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:19 am
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 12:27 pm
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So i wrote quite a few poems... idk ima just post some that mean the most to me and one that i need some critique on. and please i dont need its good it sucked i need suggestions and comments. dont mean to be blunt its just im always getting its good and that doesnt help me.
[[no title yet]]
You ask me why I cant be happy
You ask me why im so down
you ask me to help you get my crush
then ask why I wear a frown
you make no sence to me
when you ask me why its so hard to be
like the other girls that wear a smile all the time
im sorry I cant be a mime
i show how i feel
my emotions are not on a reel,
they cant be held back
sorry if my mask is cracked.
actually im not.
Voices
Sitting here alone in a cold dark room,
Waiting, wishing I could talk to you,
But you’ve moved on and moved away too,
People say I should do the same,
But all I can think about is your name,
And all those silly games we used to play,
And how we used to talk all the time,
I can hear your voice in my mind,
Telling me not to jump,
Not to cry,
Not to cut myself one more time.
You should know that in the past,
I once dreamt of a true romance,
Where you and I could be a little more,
But then my dream faded,
And all the things I once loved,
I found that I know hated.
I need you in my life,
And for you I’m willing to fight.
[[no title yet]]
Dying inside
Wishing you were mine
To hold in my arms
I’m under your charm
I sit all day long
Writing you songs
Confessing my feelings
You give them meaning.
I cry out
But I doubt
You can hear
I guess your covering your ears
I sit and cry
Tears streaming from my crimson eyes
I want to be there for you
Even if right now you don’t want me too
I see a star,
I wish to move far
Away from this place
So I don’t have to see your face
You remind me of what I loved and lost
Of how to the side I got tossed
When I told you I cared
I was hurt and you were despaired.
A friendship gone
By one little song
That was placed in your hands
Painting the picture perfectly with crayons
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:57 pm
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Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 7:07 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:22 pm
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ok, so i have a lot of poems, but this is, like, one of the only ones that doesn't involve suicide, so forgive the fact that it's long.
From my seat atop the world, I watch my scenery ignite.
Flames and smoke engulf and choke the stars littering the night
They dive onto the ground and our wishes follow for the ride
The sky is flooded with emptiness but the flames refuse to die
Instead the fiery fingers caress the navy sheet that lays
Stitching up the holes that illuminated our darkest days
They breathe smoke and smoldering ashes into the immaculate shield
Charging forth on ember horses with no intent to yield
Tearing down the weakened barrier separating heaven and hell
For in reality it ceased to exist when humanity fatefully fell;
The light shed upon us through these final days was wasted, all in vain
Displaying not the sweet pleasures in life but rather perpetual pain
Yet all I can feel is a sensation of peace
My world of grey has a splash of light
For in the midst of two worlds on the brink of collapse
It’s a relief to not have to fight;
Don’t concern yourself with trifling things like defeating the inevitable
It’s out of your hands, and though stuck in your mind, still beyond all control
Just sit back waiting patiently and seek the beauty beneath it all
Then find your terminal velocity as you chase the stars and take this fall
A breeze begins to build and the trees start to sway
We’ve lost sight of ourselves, and now we’re blown away
Like the petals off the roses that survive the tragic disaster
Free yourselves from the thorns and look not towards what’s after.
Just hold on to that thread of faith
weak as it may be
for despite the fact that what’s to come is unknown
it must be better than what we see.
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 4:10 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 5:49 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 7:22 pm
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the_forgotten_thought XxXlil rock_goddessXxX holy ********! excuse my language but oh my damn your hella good mister forgotten!! gah *jealous* haha, thanks. redface and uh, that's miss forgotten. haha
oh my gosh im so sorry!! redface ahhh *hides under a rock* |
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 8:12 pm
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XxXlil rock_goddessXxX the_forgotten_thought XxXlil rock_goddessXxX holy ********! excuse my language but oh my damn your hella good mister forgotten!! gah *jealous* haha, thanks. redface and uh, that's miss forgotten. haha oh my gosh im so sorry!! redface ahhh *hides under a rock*
trust me, i get it so often in the real world, it doesn't even bug me. i'm just happy that someone actually spent the time to read one of my insanely long poems. haha. |
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