some rough draft art

[littlecherub512]

okay i will be putting some of my rough draft art in here for all to critique
fell free to post your rough drafts here to  

[littlecherub512]

i don't know whether I should leave her naked or put cloths on her; or what kind of cloths to put on her. I also don't know if I should do the detail in the wings, I think it might take away from the whole drawing.

 

[angel of diablos]

looks good
real good
4laugh
when you do the shading and coloring the wings will have all the detail needed.
if i may add when you go to add color to make the stars more like bursts of light rather than stars could bring a new depth to the pic. the flair tool could be nice.but i am an amateur at computer art and this is only a suggestion.it looks great as it is.
her form is perfect and so is the moon.  

[littlecherub512]

thanks i drew the moon by hand meaning i didn't use anything to make a circle it was just going to be a doodle but i really liked it and wanted to make something good out of it.
i don't really have any good tools to help me use photoshop sadly i use a laptop and it makes photoshop hard to do so i was going to color it with color pencil but i will make the stars shine brightly.  

[Ray Wolfheart]

i like the form of the wings, and the angel face n.n maybe if she has the feet, just a little bit larger, i guess that the feet are small dont you think?  

[magister magi kairi]

I saw this one in the picture post. Very nice. I do agree with KIM_RAY though. the feet should be a little bigger, not too much bigger though.
Also, i think the wings look great as they are, and you should leave her naked. clothes would take too much away from the picture.

 

[littlecherub512]

KIM_RAY

i like the form of the wings, and the angel face n.n maybe if she has the feet, just a little bit larger, i guess that the feet are small dont you think?

yea i agree they are a bit small i shall fix them  

[littlecherub512]

magister magi kairi

I saw this one in the picture post. Very nice. I do agree with KIM_RAY though. the feet should be a little bigger, not too much bigger though.
Also, i think the wings look great as they are, and you should leave her naked. clothes would take too much away from the picture.

thanks i did manage to put a simple elegant dress on her though but so far it is only on the rough draft i am doing the final draft on a different sheet of paper i have a small light table so i will see what i like better  

[Shynay kuciky]

um isn't very good but this is it i chose cherry flower cuz my best friend and me like japan in the top in corners i make tatoos (we love tatoos, we want 1 tatoo each) i hope you like wink  

[littlecherub512]

thats not bad at all i think it is very creative
and i love the flowers in the corners
what kind of tattoo do you and your friend want  

[IvyCrush]

nice job guys lol ^.^ ill psot some pic's that im drawn in real and a pic that ive edited <3 im new at editing editing but its actually pretty good :O im way better at makeing pixels lol  

[Shynay kuciky]

littlecherub512

thats not bad at all i think it is very creative
and i love the flowers in the corners
what kind of tattoo do you and your friend want

my friend want the eye and me the simbol wink  

[littlecherub512]

Shynay kuciky

littlecherub512

thats not bad at all i think it is very creative
and i love the flowers in the corners
what kind of tattoo do you and your friend want

my friend want the eye and me the simbol wink

cool  

[littlecherub512]

IvyCrush

nice job guys lol ^.^ ill psot some pic's that im drawn in real and a pic that ive edited <3 im new at editing editing but its actually pretty good :O im way better at makeing pixels lol

i will be looking forward to seeing them  

[Necro Lilium Proxy]

littlecherub512

i don't know whether I should leave her naked or put cloths on her; or what kind of cloths to put on her. I also don't know if I should do the detail in the wings, I think it might take away from the whole drawing.

I think you should add detail to the wings, because that will give the drawing a point of focus.
I also think you should give her clothes, but you should go about it in a very minimalistic way.
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