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 Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:58 pm
My muse is on a massive yaoi binge. Hence, I'mma be posting some of my yaoi-themed writings. Savvy? Warning: The poems might be a little racy, but there's no description of actual sex.
Go ahead and critique my stuff... just be nice.
First one I'm gonna post is called "Afterword." It might just be the afterword to my gay vampire story, hence the name. Basically, the vampire is about to turn his lover into a vampire... the evening after the human boy's best friend's funeral.
Afterword.
Sunset
on the night of our
almost wedding.
I rise,
prepared to claim you
for my own
forever.
The sound of water
trickles down to my ears
from some floors above,
the cathartic rain
pouring from the shower-head.
Are you trying
to cleanse your heart
of what he left behind?
Are you trying
to cleanse your flesh
of its craving for mine?
Are you trying
to cleanse yourself
of your human life?
It’s agony, isn’t it?
Straddling two lives
was never easy.
No matter, my love.
Wash away your cares
and apprehension,
free yourself of
mortal fears.
Wait but a few more moments;
the river will soon run red.
I hear you coming downstairs.
The lights go off.
The quick stroke of a match
and a candle blazes to life.
Now, for the last time,
I behold the beauty of your
bare human flesh.
Your body longs
to let me in. I crave
a final taste of you.
We can only resist for so long.
You’ve just emerged from the shower.
Good, this will make everything easier:
for me and for you,
for the union of our blood
and the union of our bodies.
Now you stand
with your back to the wall.
I draw close to you,
caressing every inch
of your warm, moist skin.
You smile as I
allow the towel
to slip from your waist.
“But why?” you ask me.
“Why here? Why now?”
Innocently,
you tilt your head,
exposing your neck.
I dive into your
eyes with a
passionate gaze,
then I pull you
away from the wall,
holding you by the shoulders,
and whisper into your ear,
“Easy access.”
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Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 6:55 pm
This one doesn't go into detail, but it's about a girl walking in on two guys that she likes... well, you know. wink
Thor slams a thunderbolt into my chest
as I open the bedroom door, the window
to a sexual storm. The hurricane between
the sheets has six eyes: two each to the
two lovers, and two of mine, adoringly
torn at the door. I am frozen, incapable
of movement; they have stolen my breath,
and with my very breath they seem to
carve a moving, mocking monument to
the love I once showed them, silently,
separately. Ah, to think I had a chance!
The words on my tongue slide easily
between their lips: more, more, more,
as I whisper mine, mine, mine.
They see me not; they heed not my
feminine invasion of their masculine
intimacy. Like dragons of red passion,
their heated breath makes the scene
a kiln, securing their bodies together
while melting the fragments of my
shattered heart. Indeed, I melt through
the very pits of hell as I stand,
weak-kneed, scorched and breathless,
in a private, bittersweet heaven.
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Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 9:26 pm
wow that last one was really sad. The frist one was very powerful. Great poerty, I must say.
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Posted: Wed Dec 17, 2008 5:59 pm
Heheh, thanks. I didn't mean for the last one to be sad. Only... bittersweet. Like... okay here's the thought process.
"WHOA HOLY CRAP. I like these two guys, and they're in here having sex. Oh my gosh, haaaaaaawwwwt. But this means I have no chance with either one of them! Because, gorgeous as they are, I can't have... because they're gay for each other! Oh, so hot!"
Hence the "bittersweet heaven" part.
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Posted: Thu Dec 18, 2008 8:19 pm
EvFaerAshlynn Heheh, thanks. I didn't mean for the last one to be sad. Only... bittersweet. Like... okay here's the thought process.
"WHOA HOLY CRAP. I like these two guys, and they're in here having sex. Oh my gosh, haaaaaaawwwwt. But this means I have no chance with either one of them! Because, gorgeous as they are, I can't have... because they're gay for each other! Oh, so hot!"
Hence the "bittersweet heaven" part. yeah the only reason was why I said sad was becuase I was half asleep when I wrote it it is bittersweet, you wrote it well
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Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 4:05 pm
krazii13 EvFaerAshlynn Heheh, thanks. I didn't mean for the last one to be sad. Only... bittersweet. Like... okay here's the thought process.
"WHOA HOLY CRAP. I like these two guys, and they're in here having sex. Oh my gosh, haaaaaaawwwwt. But this means I have no chance with either one of them! Because, gorgeous as they are, I can't have... because they're gay for each other! Oh, so hot!"
Hence the "bittersweet heaven" part. yeah the only reason was why I said sad was becuase I was half asleep when I wrote it it is bittersweet, you wrote it well
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 1:19 pm
EvFaerAshlynn krazii13 EvFaerAshlynn Heheh, thanks. I didn't mean for the last one to be sad. Only... bittersweet. Like... okay here's the thought process.
"WHOA HOLY CRAP. I like these two guys, and they're in here having sex. Oh my gosh, haaaaaaawwwwt. But this means I have no chance with either one of them! Because, gorgeous as they are, I can't have... because they're gay for each other! Oh, so hot!"
Hence the "bittersweet heaven" part. yeah the only reason was why I said sad was becuase I was half asleep when I wrote it it is bittersweet, you wrote it well It's okay, everyone needs to be bitchy occasionally. Think about it this way, women get PMSy, and men get man periods, therefore everybody has to be bitchy once in awhile.
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Posted: Mon Dec 22, 2008 10:36 pm
Loooove them!
The first one's really sweet.
The second one is really ironic. xD
It makes me think of my Mom's ex-boyfriend in college. After she dumped him, he turned gay. xD
What would be funny is if they were her ex-boyfriends and they fell in love. xD
That would be sooo funny.
Also, in the second one, you're like "these guys are having sex... hawwwt"
Is she a yaoi fangirl? :3
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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:39 pm
SarcasticIrony Loooove them! The first one's really sweet. The second one is really ironic. xD It makes me think of my Mom's ex-boyfriend in college. After she dumped him, he turned gay. xD What would be funny is if they were her ex-boyfriends and they fell in love. xD That would be sooo funny. Also, in the second one, you're like "these guys are having sex... hawwwt" Is she a yaoi fangirl? :3
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Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2008 2:14 pm
If I ever walk into a room where two hot guys are pasionate together, I so pray I got my camera on me.
I'm not some pervert but ....
Okay maybe I am. redface heart
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