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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:10 am
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Nice name for something so simple huh? So I just want some feedback, help anything would be good. I'll add more when I get em'.
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Armour only, just the armor, please do not comment how ugly the hair looks... just rather, the shape of the hair or hair piece, doesn't match or is not as effective with the rest of the armor or something. I put the hair and eyes and stuff in there for that sole purpose!
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This ones a real doozy, I can't seem to figure out how to do the legs, your looking up at her and she looking down at you, but i didn't bother putting detail on since I could even figure out the shape!!! TT^TT
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2008 5:47 am
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Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:56 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:54 am
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Posted: Fri Feb 01, 2008 7:50 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 4:50 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 7:23 am
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:22 am
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azora natashi Ya, I knew I needed to work on the staff, how the cloth contours is way beyond me and I don't get how the staff would lay on it's side...., as for the second pic I should have specified that it was the armor as the character is not mine at all and it was a contest... sweatdrop Thanks anyways, I'll see what I can do about the hands, still, clothing, beyond me, hands..... is like the worst in history... thanks anyways....
I don't mean the design of the clothing, I mean the way it sits on the body~~ they look like they were pasted on her and don't have any weight/substance of its own.
We're not trying to put down what you did or say that it was bad. Not at all, we're just pointing out things that you can work on in the future.
And as everything drawn comes from real life, it's best to practice and understand how things work in life before changing them up in drawings wink
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Posted: Sat Feb 02, 2008 9:32 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:50 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 12:35 am
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Wile you did do considerable better on this one than you did the others, proportion wise, there are still a few problems I can spot right off the bat. 1) General, hips are as wide as the shoulders, unless your like me and like drawing huge hips <3 2) The hands, once again are to small. Hands should be able to cover the majority of the face when sprawled out. 3) The bottom portion of her arms seams long. The bottom and the top of the arm are roughly the same length, if you don’t see what I mean bend your arm at the elbow and look - the top part of the arm (from shoulder to elbow) is the same length as the bottom portion (from elbow to knuckles, when your first is balled) 4) There is no definition between ankle and foot Umm… Wile I’m sure there are a few more theses are the only ones I can spot. Anatomy, as people have stressed before me, is very important to work on. I find using stock images as a reference is always a good way to go. Besides the few problems your art is still really cute and the fell of your pieces really makes it across, something that is hard to do.
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 8:42 am
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:48 am
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Okay The hips no matter what person, will never match the shoulders, I look in the mirror, no such thing, I look at my friends, none of them are like that, so from personal experience, there are no such thing as shoulders = hips. The arms I feel are long too, but then again, they are the same length, but if I make the hands bigger than they are now it looks like their too big, which mean I'll have to enlarge everything else, which is my problem.
OKay, so your criticizing the 1 or 3rd one right? 3 one was too hard, I even took reference pics, but they didn't quite turn out, 1 one..... I was dumb with that one it really sucked.
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:12 pm
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I understand that yes, some people do have smaller hips than others, but every proportion tutorial I have ever read, including those in books and on the net, says that the hips ARE as big as the shoulders. I would also like to point out the fact that you are drawing anime and, in the anime style, women almost always have big busts, tiny waists and large hips. I'm not sure if we are measuring from different parts of the shoulder but, when I look in the mirror and drop a line from my shoulder down, my hips hit that same line. As far as your arm length goes, I have the same problem, I always make my arms way to long, I would suggest next using a series of circles, lines and boxers before you go in and being filling out the body. It really helps. If you looking for some good tutorials or references try www.bakaneko.com or www.posemaniacs.com
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Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:34 pm
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For starters, stop arguing with people trying to help you. The ONLY thing you should be firing back are questions to help clarify things you didn't understand. I cannot stress this enough. This is NOT picture post.
I'm going to start by discussion consistent issues you have throughout, why I think you're having them and what I feel you can do to overcome them.
The single most important thing I can tell people doing anime is to not have anime pictures in view when they work. Yes, study something that inspires you. Then put it away. Use only real people/animals/props for reference. The third picture from the top looks like an eyeball of Hinata from Naruto. I'm not going to get into how people can tell. Just know that it's easy to tell. (By the way, don't try to convince me that you didn't. If you did, I'm warning you to please review the rules of the guild.)
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=7972255
We have a nice list of things to help you learn about proportion, anatomy, and such for drawing people. Please read them.
Your drawings lack good proportion, the anatomy is pretty structureless and seems random, and the images are very flat and stickish.
Anatomy/Proportion: Check the stuff in the tutorials thread on proportion. It does help. Of course, use real people as well and study them. You'll figure things out. Some things you want to always remember, the hand with fingers spread covers the face (so from wrist top to middle finger tip is about the length of the face and the feet are as long as your wrist to your elbow. (The inside of that part of your arm. Test it out. Feet are much longer than people think they are.
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See how the body is broken into simple 3d shapes? Lay out the bodies so you get some mass to them, and you can show how they're pointing. You'll find the drawing gets easier to do and they look better.
Keep at it and make sure to observe real people and things.
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