Critiques from the awesome me!

[GentleBirb]

OneWeekRainisu

Another one from me, here, I want to know what you think. Its done on MS paint.

Considering that was done in MS paint it is a very solid job. I like the pose and the color choices. Like the color choises but... there needs to be more shading to give her depth. I am not sure if your computer is darker but making sure to strike middle ground is best even with white. This is a peice I did. which could show the example of how I used a dark lavender color to shade the white on my character Amice. Try using a darker gray blue, purple, or red to shade and make the shading blatantly obvious. Can see the figure and the stars easily if looked at from a distance. But that's all I have to add to that one... also with MS paint I would draw the lines where the shading would go then fill in with colors and experiment for the darker shades

emotion_c8  

[OneWeekRainisu]

MahoHaku

OneWeekRainisu

Another one from me, here, I want to know what you think. Its done on MS paint.

Considering that was done in MS paint it is a very solid job. I like the pose and the color choices. Like the color choises but... there needs to be more shading to give her depth. I am not sure if your computer is darker but making sure to strike middle ground is best even with white. This is a peice I did. which could show the example of how I used a dark lavender color to shade the white on my character Amice. Try using a darker gray blue, purple, or red to shade and make the shading blatantly obvious. Can see the figure and the stars easily if looked at from a distance. But that's all I have to add to that one... also with MS paint I would draw the lines where the shading would go then fill in with colors and experiment for the darker shades

emotion_c8

XD thanks, and its hard to shade, I'm almost thinking of having them colored by a friend of mine who colors line art.  

[blue_eyed_wolf16]

Which one looks right?



This was a commission for a customer in my art shop
This is mainly what I'm mainly concerned about
*Chest: I don't normally ask for boobs but try to make it noticeable with the clothes not just by giving me a cleavage. I'm not asking for big ones, just enough to give me a feminine look. If you can do that, that would be fantastic.

I wouldn't think that they would really show because the scarf thing would be kinda loose
I just want to get an opinion from someone who knows better than me

(sorry if I stretched the page too much) sweatdrop  

[lince-x]

Is a uncompleted works suitable? It's too lazy rework something that you think finally done. smile  

[GentleBirb]

lince-x

Is a uncompleted works suitable? It's too lazy rework something that you think finally done. smile

Oh, completed or not they are totally acceptable emotion_dealwithit

 

[lince-x]

My doubts about perspective and the perspective on tiger. Boots details will be remade.  

[lince-x]

MahoHaku

Still need help.  

[lince-x]

 

[GentleBirb]

lince-x

My doubts about perspective and the perspective on tiger. Boots details will be remade.

For some reason this didn't show up in my thing until... Wait this was just recently posted. **Sorry lack of internet and such right now at college** Anyway for an unfinished detailed piece I would suggest that you work on the organic details and fix them up a bit. The face of the man, and the tiger and flesh those out really well. They are the hardest things to fix when you get into the working of a finished illustration. I'd like to see an updated version later on perhaps.

 

[lince-x]

MahoHaku

Oh, how pathetic the previous pic was...

Still slowly work on it. Not done some bg details and light. May be i should change some wear colors.

 

[lince-x]

After pair of days i'll claim it fully done if i'll not find an anoter stroke to make.