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PostPosted: Mon Aug 01, 2011 8:39 am
"Beautiful Paradise"

I see you, standing there all alone
To see you there, make me your clone

Unable to move, to speak to you
Muscles paralyzed, nothing I can do

The wind tells me that you want me
My heart says it’s right, that it’s my destiny

But now why can’t I even speak to you
Why am I paralyzed with this love for you

You seem so nice, yet you’re so strict
Sometimes I wish I was with you, to predict

To see us running through time, hands intertwined
My love for you is pure, like the sounds of a wind chime

Come with me to a place, a place of paradise
To be with out you would be like frozen in ice

Could this be, the right thing for you and me
I say it is, I feel it is our only destiny

Just you and me, on the golden fields of time
I would pay the time, if loving you is a crime

I would be shamed, with myself to blame
Left with out you is like a fire with no flame

You are the fire that melted the ice around my heart
If you deny me, it would be like a rose torn apart  
PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:28 am
This poem gives me a warm feeling.
I wish someone would write something like that about me.
The way you write the feelings you feel by just looking at her.
I love it!  

Dark Angel Videl
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