What would you say?

[Sephiroth 1 Wnged Angel]

ack in the oden days guys would wright a poem to the girls asking them to live with them and we had to wright a poem to the girls in our class asking them to come away with u and this is what I wrote.

When you are near
cherry blossems bloom
when you leave I fear
they will die and wither, bringing back the gloom.
When the wind of change blows
it stirs with old memories.
My feelings for you grows
like stealing my heart through thievery.
They come and go
as the seasons change.
I await under the gazebo
watching the sunset of beige
waiting for the day you are mine
only to make more sweet memories.

Would you live with me if I read this to you or would you tell me to get lost? I wants to know!

I have an idea! Anyone who wants to wright a poem back in response and I will chose one persons poem and give them something good! Who knows what it might be!  

[Your Own Personal Hell]

I would live with you! That poem is so sweet! I can't write half as good as that no matter what anyone says! T^T  

[Sephiroth 1 Wnged Angel]

I'm glad you like it. I'm thinking of doing something with this with the guild. I wish I had the poem that the girl wrote back...  

[Your Own Personal Hell]

I sit here and wait on this night
As I watch the stars shine bright
The gentle feel of the cool breaze
Sets all my nerves at ease
About if what you said was true
If not this moment I shall rue
But I hope you'll hug me and smile
If not then I'll stay here and wait a while
It seems to me like this is a trial
But if I'd have to I'd walk a mile
Anything and everything I'd go through
Just to spend a single night with you  

[thalia_jane]

aw that is so sweet! it would be nice if guys were still had some form of Chivalry.  

[Blackgun12]

It was very good and I like the theme of it. Good Job.  

[Sephiroth 1 Wnged Angel]

I hold on so tightly now
Our hope of being together should fate allow
For the gods of fate can be so vain
And use love against us to cause much pain
And though I’m not by your side
I will travel far and wide
I will stair into your eyes and say I love you as I hold you and smile
Never to let you go for a while
So now don’t you be afraid
As our hearts will guide our way  

[Your Own Personal Hell]

Sephiroth 1 Wnged Angel

I hold on so tightly now
Our hope of being together should fate allow
For the gods of fate can be so vain
And use love against us to cause much pain
And though I’m not by your side
I will travel far and wide
I will stair into your eyes and say I love you as I hold you and smile
Never to let you go for a while
So now don’t you be afraid
As our hearts will guide our way

The sun begins to arise
As the hope within me somewhat dies
I waited for so long
Had my decision been wrong
Try to ignore it I do
I can't help but wonder of you
And if you were to actually arrive
Or even if these feelings would strive
To not think of this I do try
Though, I do start to cry
I cannot stop these tears
As they are filled with all of my fears  

[Sephiroth 1 Wnged Angel]

You’re the thorn in my finger
The scene in my chapter
It’s killing me to wait
Knowing you’re the bait
It’s in my mind
Walking a thin line
You’re forever and always in my heart
Waiting to snap like a trap
And when I’m dead
In my head
Will you stay?
In my dreams
You are the means
So if you look for me
I’ll be here

(having way to much fun with this!)  

[Your Own Personal Hell]

((I don't feel like rhyming anymore, though it may still happen sometimes! Oh, and I can tell~!))

The wind begins to blow harshly againstmy small frame
I continue to stand and wait for your arrival
The tears have stopped but the fear does stay
I begin to think myself silly for even hoping
Yet, I continue to hope for it is all I have left
My hope of gazing into your eyes is far too strong
I wish upon the stars that my wait won't be long
The moonlight shines upon my pale skin
Such light as this turns whatever it lands upon a shade of blue
Though, the sadness of such a color does not affect my mood
For I will continue to stay here and wait for you
Even though my hope suffers much I will not budge
The chill of the wind has started to act upon me
I shiver and shake but I do not move
If I am to see your smile before I freeze
Then my restless spirit shall be put at ease