FireClan

[Akiko-infinity]

Username: Akiko-infinity
Cat Name: Firekit
Gender (tom or she-cat): She-cat
Appearance (picture or written out): *i'll edit this late with a pic*
Personality: quiet. serious and modest. Tends to have a temper. Not afraid of danger, and quick to take the lead if no one else already has.
Bio: mother died in childbirth. Apparently the father is unknown...
Rank: -kit

* Is sitting in the nursury, looking bored*
(to no one in particular) "I want to be out there, doing something..."  

[Emmy Dark]

I'm roguekit

I agree  

[Emmy Dark]

Name: itacifangirl1
cat name: Sootkit
gender: she-cat
Picture: my sig accept i have blue eyes
Personality: Strong, togh, and brave easily gets into fights
bio: *still seeing if someone will be my kin*
Rank: kit  

[Emmy Dark]

*trots into clearing and gets a peice of fresh kill from the pile*
*goes back into nersery*
hey mom when am i going to be an apprentice?

mom: Soon enogh roguekit soon enough.  

[Emmy Dark]

*hears the sun-high patrol returning*
patrol all quiet Thunderstar sir

leader: Good get some pray and relax  

[xXRozen_SuiseisekiXx]

(Hey guys! Just FYI...try putting something like this- Firekit sat next to her mother, waiting for her Thunderstar to tell the clan it was alright to come back home.' Its as if you're writing a story, in third person.)
(PS. We're still not in camp yet, a fire started and we're stuck across the river.)  

[Emmy Dark]

oh ok Sootkit sat next to her mother still shivering from fear  

[Akiko-infinity]

Firekit padded up to Sootkit awkwardly. "Don't worry, Sootkit, it'll be all right. The warriors won't let anything happen to us." She nuzzled Sootkit lightly.  

[Suicidal Rain]

Sprintosng padded up to the little kit, who was shivering in fear. "Ah hello litle one's." Sprintosng mewed in a noble voice. "Why are you shaking?" Sprintsong asked in a still noble tone.  

[NitroScorpio]

"That firey monster doesnt seem that dangerous..." said Duskpaw in a shakey voice. and in a more confident voice, "Well the rain should take care of it." Just then she saw a fox. (DUHDUNDAH!!!)  

[Suicidal Rain]

"A fox? oh dear, stay away from the edge of the creek and warn the others." Sprintsog mewed as she sprinted to warn the Queens and thier kits.  

[NitroScorpio]

Duskpaw hissed and ran full speed towards the fox.  

[Akiko-infinity]

Firekit spoke up boldly. "She's scared, Sprintsong. I think we all are." She looked up at Sprintsong with worried eyes. "will we be able to go home?"  

[NitroScorpio]

The fox saw Duskpaw and growled and tried to bite Duskpaw. "Ha! You'll have to be faster than that fox!" yowled Duskpaw as she dodged the jaws of said fox.  

[Suicidal Rain]

Akiko-infinity

Firekit spoke up boldly. "She's scared, Sprintsong. I think we all are." She looked up at Sprintsong with worried eyes. "will we be able to go home?"

Sprintsong looked down at Firekit, with eye's unable to tell what she would do. "Were all scared.." But then Sprintsong heard some hissing and Zipped towards the sound.