Standing Ready

• Artist: An Angels Melody
• Description: A song about being ready for whenever the end may come, honestly, idk if it is a poem or a song, i guess it could be both
• Date: 10/23/2009
• Tags: standing ready

We may never know
When the end is to come
But I give everything all i got
So do alot of but not some
One day you will sit and realize
What you have to do
You have to make the people understand
Understand the truth
So everybody sing
Like its the last time you might ever
And everybody live
Like its the last day you might ever
As an army we stand strong
Waiting for it to hit
And as a family we stand firm
Waiting for it to destroy
We may never know
When the end is to come
But i stand my ground
So do alot but not some
One day you will sit and realize
What you have to do
You have to make yourself understand
Understand the end
So everybody breath
Like its the last time you might ever
And everybody love
Like its the last time you might ever
Waiting for the end to come
We may never know
How to face it
Or how it will go
All we know is
We are ready

Comments

[X-Jet of the GGs]

wow that was pretty good! smile become a poet(or a singer)

[Danna Amamus]

I like the repetition, it definitely enforces the feeling you're going for and I think that it is a powerful piece. As for edits, if you get around to them, maybe you should reconsider some of your phrase choices - for example, "you might ever do" seems a little awkward and I got hung up on it a few times - but something as simple as removing the 'do' would fix that. Great job!

[rachellerockstar15]

5 stars, maybe 100,000 stars if i could

[rachellerockstar15]

this is awesome. be a poem writer...for army people

[ii_Hannah_XD]

I thought it was horriable!!!!!!!! lol jk jkn!!!!!!!!!!!! biggrin its good biggrin

[lovedoeslast]

I like this but would have tried ti make it into two, keep writing u got talent.