The harbinger

• Artist: Heckova Biker Babe
• Description: the warnig about the end of the world
• Date: 07/09/2009
• Tags: harbinger warning doom pain theend

Hope drained life
Tear filled eyes
Filled with pain
Look on those who died

all the while

Lies and half truths
That're twined together
Float unseen by
Like a gentle feather

here I am

I am the harbinger
A warning of doom
The sky will come down
Destruction comes soon

Comments

[Ketsuyin]

Very captivating. The only thing I can advise is perhaps using a larger vocabulary. Not that you have to to make good poetry, but it makes the poem more captivating.

[Heckova Biker Babe]

please comment i want ur opinion