God's Tears

• Artist: child_of_the_flame
• Description: Religous in a non-Christian way. If I have to explain it, you don't need to know. Wrote this in my photography class... because it was raining too hard to be taking pictures.
• Date: 05/09/2009
• Tags: tears rain happy

Is it terrible that I feel this way?
The pouring rain ices my skin
Exposed because my jacket protects
My books.
There is a small thrill
Because every new drop
Quickens my heartbeat
God or angels are crying they say
But I smile and breathe in
The air which no words could possibly describe
(Very well anyway)
Damp with God’s tears
His angel’s lament
And my euphoric feeling
Is it terrible that I feel this way?

Comments

[SilvertongueSagittarius]

not bad. good for an novice writer. 3/5
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