The Ocean

• Artist: pumpkinpiiekat
• Description: my second poem that i wrote.
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: ocean

Covering most of the world,
With little Islands stranded everywhere,
Foaming when the waves crash,
Scaring all the fish.

The natural disasters;
The sharks can sense;
Destroying everything,
Floating on the surface.

All the sharks go and hide,
And the fish tag along.
I wish I could breath under water,
so I could be with them.

Comments

[Miss Salsa Sam]

not bad. the topic of your poem is great but it is alittle hard to read, it doesnt flow nicely. I think this poem is good, and you should keep writing!