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My heart is as sharp as a thorn
Only because its been torn
My heart it can't be fixed
My emotions are mixed
No matter how many times I love
No one cane replace you my Dove
I just can't say "No"
You say I'm as beautiful as snow
I wish you could just be
Happy when you are with me
- by Lily Bo Billy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/13/2008 |
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- Title: My Heart
- Artist: Lily Bo Billy
- Description: This is a poem I wrote when me and my boyfriend split up.....
- Date: 12/13/2008
- Tags: heart
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Manga Matturz - 02/18/2009
- omg. so amazing...
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- Sweetsunshine13 - 02/15/2009
- i feel like that i really liked it nice job
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- Havatara - 12/15/2008
- It's great, but the rhyming sounded a bit forced, you know? Try loosening it up a bit, or make it smoother, like in the second like "Only because it's been SO torn."
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- anbu-of-sand - 12/13/2008
- awesome 5/5 smile
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