You were too late

• Artist: iTakiz
• Description: hey i was just bored and i did this.
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: were late

I waited all day
You never came
I waited all week
You never came
I waited all month
You never came
I waited and you just never came
Another found me
Loving and adoring
I loved her too
I was done waiting
I found someone else
I never waited again
Right then and there
She came back
I told him
"You were too late"
She was waiting for me....

Comments

[SeeingGuardianWolf]

hey i wrote a poem like that b4 i posted it awhile ago. and i made alot of mistakes on mine.

[Eira Johnsen]

very nice. i think this is awsome writing

[iTakiz]

i proof read but thkz i'm new to this

[Tsuki Kurai]

Hm, not bad! But seriously, proof read.
(comment my poetry back?)

[iTakiz]

REALLY AWESOME lady angel u were my inspiration i saw ur poem and thought of it

[Angel Marie Swiftwing]

i love it its really good

[iTakiz]

ya i no i'm deeep