My Vow To You

• Artist: Kuleana
• Description: my boyfriend wrote this poem for me...its a long distance relationship. its very hard for both of us.
• Date: 11/13/2008
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I know you're going crazy,
I've been there too.
I can see how the weight is making your knees bend,
Let me take some of it from you.
Don't keep yourself closed off,
I am here for you to open up and let go.
There is so much you can't forget or forgive,
Let me help you cope, we can work things out together.
I hear the pain in your voice,
You need me now.
Don't worry, I'll move heaven and hell to get there.
You can't talk, you won't talk about it,
I understand.
Put your worries in my hands.
Lay your head down,
And believe that I will do anything to stop your tears.
You're ready to give up, you've stopped,
I want to be able to give you the strength to keep going.
Link arms with me, Let's move on,
As one living, breathing, loving, being.
Know that you can put faith in me.
I will be your rock, I will be your dwelling,
I am here with you, for you always.

Comments

[artcherelli]

wow this is good
i wish my bf wrote something like this....
i don't know much about poetry but, at the end of this poem,he's saying goodbye & hoping u would find someone better then him that would make u happy?...something like that

[J Locomotive]

wow that was very good my b/f is long distance too he is in jail and I met him while he was in there cause he is close with relatives, he is like what holds me together right now and my long lost family cause I was sleeping all the time giving up