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Love
Like a bird
With clipped wings
Sitting,
Somberly in his cage
Waiting,
For his chance to fly
- by xRawrImmaKannibalx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/04/2008 |
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- Title: Love
- Artist: xRawrImmaKannibalx
- Description: plz dnt critique too harshly, i already know I'm not that good ^^
- Date: 10/04/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- bball lover5 - 11/06/2012
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i like it
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- DasSnoot - 02/07/2009
- hm, sounds like one a assisted with... Any way, nice, good rythm, good meaning.
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- bonnie505 - 12/27/2008
- i can understand the meaning .i think u shouldve made it longer but very clear and good!!
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- Paradiso_In_Her_Arms - 10/04/2008
- To me it's not much in detail.. not being rude.. maybe because i tell stories and not make good old poems, but at the stand point of words it's nice.. i'll give you that.
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