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I've never known how to love, but now I do.
I now know how beautiful it is, as beautiful as you.
You came upon me as an angel, as God's blessed dove.
I know now of the strains and pressures of love.......
I can't wait to find what we will come to be,
yet i force myself to say, "Just wait and see".
As I know what I may feel, I wonder what to say,
and I can't wait to see you that one fateful day.......
I never want to think of what could of been,
only what is to be, and also wonder when.
No matter what they have said or done,
I know now that....... you are the one
I write this here on July 5th, 2008 at 3:44am,
in the name of my heart..... and my discovery
Because you set me off like an unnoticed sensor
I do this as...... A Release of Pressure......

- Title: A Release Of Pressure.....
- Artist: Titan 303
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Description:
I was up at 3:44am writing this..... i hope its good, my friends seem to like it.....
I wrote this in a LARGE state of pressure, love, and interest....
also, its in my journal.... VERY old, but i hope no-one stole it already.......
i hope u like it ^_^
[this is a first for me, if i did anything wrong, PM me....] - Date: 07/27/2008
- Tags: love pressure
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Orizion - 09/12/2008
- Excellent, I'm impressed you came up with that at that time! Think about the possibility of changing the last line: "I do this...... as A Release of Pressure....." You don't have to, but consider it.
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- Minoku-chan - 08/02/2008
- biggrin beautiful, Im sure everyone has felt this way sometime or another! ^^ very nice poem, keep on writing! I look forward to reading ur future ones. 5 stars!
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- Nidoshima the Flame Ninja - 08/01/2008
- beautiful, simply beautiful
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- Coco_Bunny23 - 08/01/2008
- aww, sweet. Makes me feel lonelier 5/5
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- iiCwooki3 - 08/01/2008
- so wonderful i so much lov3 it *tears*
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- iiCwooki3 - 08/01/2008
- awesome
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- namanei_101 - 08/01/2008
- i like it....its wonderful
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