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Me and My Guitar
As I play my guitar
note by note, beat by beat,
The beautiful harmonic melody
reminded me of my sorrowful past
My guitar pick reminded me of my most prized possession
which was my razor blade
tainted with my dried blood
As it ran across the strings,
A vision of my crimson liquid cascading quickly
from my delicate wrist came to thought
As the melody rang in my ears,
A vision of myself weeping in the darkest corner ran through my mind
The clear liquid cascading down my face,
Hitting the strings of my guitar
When my guitar is completely silent,
A vision of myself laying motionless across the floor
Crimson liquid spreading around me
Waiting for the end of my suffering came to mind.
A smile came across my face as I whispered my last words
'I wasnt always alone. I've had my guitar by my side'
- by xxHaruka_Tenshixx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/25/2008 |
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- Title: Me and my Guitar
- Artist: xxHaruka_Tenshixx
- Description: Just to let you readers know, this is not based on past expierences. The poem just sounded better in this point of view. Even thought i really do play guitar.
- Date: 07/25/2008
- Tags: guitar
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Chelly17 - 02/12/2010
- Very Very good....i like it...keep writing
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- Artistic Agony - 09/12/2009
- meant to say per song* not person
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- Artistic Agony - 09/12/2009
- Its good, It would just be better if you didn't tell the viewers exactly what the poem was about, lead them on a goose chase, so they stay and read it more. THAT, and the word 'Crimson' Is an over-used word. Once person is good, if that. Try using 'Sanguine' or 'Scarlet'. Those ones arent used often. other than that I give it a 3.8/5. you should read my latest one titles: Bewitchment From Lilt Pariah
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- cute wisdom - 01/04/2009
- really pretty ur poem is really good. did u write anymore?
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- Lili Crane - 07/25/2008
- awesome poem!
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