The Pain Will Disappear

• Artist: Katy9408
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• Date: 07/19/2008
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I'm going to draw a picture,
A picture with a twist,
I'll draw it with a razor,
A picture on my wrist,
And from this beautiful picture,
A fountain will appear,
And from my seeping fountain,
The pain will disappear.

Comments

[Katy9408]

Thanks for your criticizm guys!! I LOVE criticizm!! It tells me what I need to fix, and if I need to just stfu. LoL.

[The French Kitty]

Short and simple. The ending felt slightly rushed though but I could easily visualise everything happening while I was reading each line.

[3m0azngurl]

damn! that was the s**t! i freakin loved it!