The D*** Poem for the Masses

• Artist: Meth Related Nightmare
• Description: This poem is about...we'll, you'll find out.
• Date: 07/17/2008
• Tags: hope

A fresh start, to a new travesty.
The manipulations of a nation,
And the lies, broadcast station to station.

A million screaming violins,
A thousand voices pouring in,
A requiem for the damned.

A pregnant teen cries,
She’s drowning in the tears.
X-rays from your eyes.
You see right through the fears,

In the distance, the only hope in sight,
A baby born in the cold moonlight.
An ocean of emotion, fears, and tears.
They drown in their innocence.
And thus, I step down, and my gun slides across the floor.

Comments

[mental654]

it's great/ i lOve it.

[Butt Squeezer]

ummm i dont get it. sry xD

[Fredella]

it's alright i guess
i only like the 2 last paragraphs though

[Nightmare Zodiac]

Its really good!!!

I say you in the forums lol!

I see the structure. 3, 3, 4, 5 its used in alot of poems. I've used it myself a few times actually. Your mix of rhyming and non rhyming was intriguing.

[reacheal]

hmmm i love the scenery this gives off, and i dont think the end was bad at all! it was a powerful line, like you said all that holding a gun, or the gun was a symbol of some sort...

great poem and keep up the good work!!!!

[Transparent Nightmare]

This is so awesome!
The only thing....that very last line doesn't work very well. You might want to fix that.

[Marael]

Fantastic poem, but it bothers me that your stanzas aren't the same...your line numbers should probably have some sort of pattern to them, rather than being random.