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There is a hell that rules my mind
And takes control
Slowly tormenting all the things within
Worth anything
My life cast in shadow
My days
A lose of hope
As I bleed the fire
That encompasses my soul
With my day dieing so ever slow
The hate inside me grows
As the blaze is extinguished
With every spout of rage released
But I must have my revenge
I am the oil that burns
And running low
What has been given for one life
To take all the have wronged me
May not be enough
My revenge for you
My love my sweet
May be cut to early
As I fell my time fleeing
I now must hurry
For what I owe and must pay
For the crimes I commit this day
The new keeper comes
And I know I will not run
But I must finish before this last sun
Goes away....
- by Xx-Mystra-xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Killing revenge...
- Artist: Xx-Mystra-xX
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Description:
another one of my poem..
i write dark poetry
so if interested come and read
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ENJOY
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: revange death torment deing
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Macabre_Words - 12/13/2008
- I like this one too. You are a very talented person Shatered-EMOtions. Kinda like my sister but more deep. All things considered you're a prodigy to me.
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- Liquid Robot - 07/20/2008
- I love poems about revenge, and the imagery in this is really good - although the 'my love, my sweet' revenge is pretty much a common cliche, which subtracts some of the originality from this. All in all, nice (well, not literally) poem. smile
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- ekitten614 - 07/19/2008
- Very mysterious, and a nice sense of urgency in it! Great poem!
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- Alixander_Dunoir - 07/17/2008
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I too will do the same to my enemy!
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- DJ 4 evr - 07/17/2008
- WOW AWESOME POEM IT WAS TOTALLY EXTRAVAGANT (IF I SPELLED THAT RIGHT)
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