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Memento
The past twenty-four hours,
have left me with no power,
my landlord has shut off the lights,
I've had way too much thinking,
I feel like I'm sinking,
Amongst these long and restless nights,
I can't tell what's wrong,
My days are so long,
I can't tell if I'm really awake,
What I say what I do,
is it possibly true,
or have I made a huge mistake?
Someone tell me the answer,
Peptic Ulsers and Cancer,
are eating my stomach away,
At the thought of the word,
the truth goes unheard,
My head rests in my hands in dismay,
I dont know who I am, or who I've become,
With the songs that I love, I begin to hum,
and pray for applicable death,
I think, how to begin,
would the angels let me in,
do I send my prayers to Beth?
Sour grapes will turn to wine,
It's all just vinegar in time,
A good thing always ends,
But the time and the place,
the poise and the grace,
well I guess that all depends.....
xRinoa-Heartillyx; a melted glacier.
Copyrighted to me. <3
- by Pomegrandeur |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Title: Memento ♥
- Artist: Pomegrandeur
- Description: I wrote this when I found out someone I love very much was moving thousands of miles away. I was also confused about my feelings for him and for those of another.
- Date: 07/17/2008
- Tags: poem memento depressing confused
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Mario the Davidic Hero - 07/13/2010
- very inspiring and fantastically marvelous, i would say! wink
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- dmaticic - 01/02/2009
- My sisters poetic masterpeice is similar to that; serious and grim, but written with equally grim humor. Your meter is kind of slack, but the rhyme scheme is good. 4/5
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- Meth Related Nightmare - 07/18/2008
- I liked it. The form was intriguing but yet structured. A nice change from the normal. Hard to read. 3.5/5 (I rounded up though)
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- Draco Ashvulle - 07/17/2008
- Wow!!! Thats very deep. I don't know what to say. It's beautiful
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