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The rain stung as it fell over me. The wind had picked up, too, making the already chilly day a very cold night. The moon beams reached down from between darkened clouds. Thunder boomed, and the rain came down harder. I stayed in the same spot, unmoving, my mind spinning. Too many things had happened too fast.
I could feel my hair sticking to my face, like my clothes clung to my body. The tried to blow me away -off my spot- I'm sure. I wouldn't budge. My throat burned with the tears that I wouldn't let come. My heart ached with the sorrows I wouldn't let show.
Murder. Such a sickening thing. Disgraceful. To fall from God's glory. To leave that from which you've always known. Why? Now, someone I used to hold close, causing my pain. I knew it wouldn't be long.
I stared at the moon. Te beams seemed to point right to me, as if warning me. A frog croaked, as if signaling me to run. I stayed, unmoving, staring at the sky. Knowing.
I heard something nearby, in the bushes. I heard the sound of a bullet being fired. I knew my time was up. I felt the pain, the rush of blood. I lay there, feeling my heart's last beats, taking my last breaths, letting the rain drown me as I stare up at the moon. It's beams dancing around me until there was no more, and I was, truly, unmoving.
- by - L u c i p h y r - |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 06/07/2009 |
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- Title: Unmoving
- Artist: - L u c i p h y r -
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Description:
I wrote this just off the top of my head from the visual in my mind. O.O I didn't know whether to classify as a poem or a story because it's sort of a Poetic Story...
Sorry for the use of Religion. It was simply to signify how the 2 people were religios as children and one of them verred away from it.
Please comment. I'd like to know what people think of it.
Also look for 'Silent' (by me) - Date: 06/07/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Spiri Solon - 06/28/2009
- wow a very good short story and btw I like the use of religion and the mention of God most people don't mention God in anything like most public schools and stuff 5/5
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- UrFavoriteLunatic - 06/07/2009
- O.O VERY Good!
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