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- | Submitted on 09/28/2010 |
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- Title: Painter of the Stars
- Artist: Freya the Neko
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Description:
Deep in the sky she flies.
Never changing, just up there contemplating.
When the sun fades away
that's when she paints the sky black instead of gray.
With every stroke of her magical paint
a new star she creates.
For that is her duty up there in space.
To paint the light at night for the entire human race.
So tip your hat at night when you look a far.
And pay tribute to the Painter of the Stars. - Date: 09/28/2010
- Tags: painter stars night fairy
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Rof1 Waffl3 - 10/06/2010
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very good, 5/5 smile
btw, what background is that?
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- Cat Stripes2 - 10/06/2010
- I think your avi is very creative and well thought out, and like previous comments I would point out it took me a moment or two to decipher what exactly was there due to the background blending in so well, but once those moments of confusion passed, I think it's incredible and so are some of your other avatars, to be honest the one you commented on was the second one I submitted before, I've got a long way to go :L 4.5/5
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- Clavaria_XV - 10/05/2010
- Thank you for the detailed comment I appreciate it. I love the creativity of this avatar. My focus point is the paintbrush, it is so clever how the night is flowing out of it. The avatar itself could use little adjustments. For example the hat and the yemaya item throws it a bit off balance when it comes to color. Other than that, its a very good and unique avatar 4.5 rating.
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- Anhelitta De Celine-Val - 10/05/2010
- You have a lovely concept and poem going on here. I do wish she stood out a tad more from the background though. Perchance a white skin tone to go with the star theme?
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- Dark Ghost EX - 10/05/2010
- hmmm ill give you a 4 1/2 out of 5. i had to minus 1/2 point because i dont really see the point of having the black thing that looks like a throne.
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- Thingsastheyhappen - 10/05/2010
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I'd give it a 4/5.
I love the idea, and the writing, and you have a good pallette to work with...
It just seems messy, and the outfit and background don't really mix.
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- Youko Sakura - 10/05/2010
- This looks really good. 10/5. 5 for such a great-looking avi and 5 more for trying to put up with a nobody like MB. Honestly man, instead of bashing someone's avi, make some of your own. You are like every other noob that nobody loves.
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