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  • 'Tis A Girl *Critiques PLEASE*
  • Title: 'Tis A Girl *Critiques PLEASE*
  • Artist: --Untoten Kase--
  • Description: 'Tis a girl I drew on MS Paint ^^
    Yush, I know I suck... But uhm... the reason I'm posting this here is to get some critiques... Cause, I really wanna get better >o<
    Any critiques will help, so gimme all you got :D
  • Date: 07/25/2011
  • Tags: girl critiques please
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Comments (7 Comments)
  • .B.i.t.t.e.r. .S.w.e.e.t. - 07/29/2011
  • ok.. so you ask for critiques and then you make excuses for every little thing. just take in all that they say and stash it away in that little brain and use it next time you try a drawing. good luck

    -BS
  • --Untoten Kase-- - 07/25/2011
  • @ZebraDude3: Everyone has different styles, you may not like it, but it's all I can do for now. -.-
    @Summerwaters: Thanks, I'll work on it biggrin
    @Ixxer: It's not really that it's my style to do small waists, I was just drawing the whole thing really small for practice, and it kinda turned out that way xD Anyway, thanks!! I'll be working on it biggrin
  • Grimwyse - 07/25/2011
  • Part 2:
    The muscle that connects the shoulder and arm is called a deltoid. It's a little over-exaggerated, and goes down a little to far (compared to normal human anatomy). See how you have the arm after the bulge, near the ribs? If you just follow that line going up, it will connect to the shoulder and look fine.
    Check the web for human anatomy, just for references. It really helps. :3 Good try!
  • Grimwyse - 07/25/2011
  • Oki. First, Eff the p***k who said Fail on the eyes. Ever tried drawing in paint? Actually. Screw off, don't care.

    You did really good for a paint drawing.
    Is it your style to draw small waists? If so then it's fine, if you're aiming for realism, it should be a bit bigger. See the ribs? Try to aim for the hips being the same size. You can work out the hourglass shape from there, so it doesn't look as deformed.
    Summer was on something about the shoulders. They're a bit too big.
  • VKqJkH8yfUsdEH_XDok - 07/25/2011
  • hey, I think this is a really good start, love the hair. : ) One thing you might want to try next time is making the shoulders smaller and hips bigger. Girls hips are usually wider or at least equal to their shoulders so it'll help her look more feminine. Looks good though! Keep at it!
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