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  • Murira - 08/05/2008
  • Hahaha, okaay. ^_^

    "(a)nee-chan" isn't polite though. It's very informal. Maybe even like...a term of endearment? "Onee-san" would be the polite one.

    Well anywho, keep it up. ^_^
  • blustar181 - 08/05/2008
  • yeah i know the ba looks weird...but i didnt wanna erase it just to make a sound effect look good so i just left it like that >.< yeah but in this case im taking haru's personality and calling her ane-ue...not as polite as nee-chan or onee-san
  • Murira - 08/04/2008
  • Nice, keep up the good work.

    I'd practice writing Japanese characters though...yours look a little awkward. The da characters look kinda...really blocky, and the ba looks weird. XD;; It's not a circle, it's a line that goes down and loops around. Unless you were going for a circle look. "Aneue" doesn't seem like a common term, too. Wouldn't it be better to use "nee-chan" or "onee-san"?

    XD;; Sorry, that was kinda long.
  • blustar181 - 08/04/2008
  • lol thanks! ^^ it at least takes me about 2 hours (usually more) to finish one page... O.o so no im actually pretty slow at drawing...^^;;
  • elbourne - 08/04/2008
  • Great job, especially on the perspective and background of the first panel. You've definitely got talent here. :]
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