being married

• Artist: drea1990
• Description:
• Date: 04/16/2009
• Tags: being married

it wasnt all that i was happy at first and it ended after a year in a half
all we did was yell and fight
we were never happy
now im almost done with school and i got a new boyfriend
we are going to prom and his family likes me
he might be the one i should have waited to get married
so to all you young girls its best to wait and not rush this so fast you have
a family that loves you and friends that are always there for you so dont
ruin it all because some boy said "will you marry me" if your young so i
need time .... or were still to young i've been through alot in one year .

Comments

[CharIene]

Same with me moomoo.

[teentitans-gogogo]

its illeagual to get married at youre age unless you live in vermont,do you?

[Rose of Hope]

I agree, you're a bit young to get married if you just graduated high school, but it's your life. You do what you want. I'm just here to rate your writing. To be honest... It wasn't good. There are these things called CAPITALS that you put at the beginnings of words that start sentences, and there are proper nouns that you can use instead of 'he' all the time. Lastly, there are apostrophes. For example: "If you're young" instead of "If your young". And it's "a lo

[MooMoo8843]

i totally agree eiffeltowerciel

[Blood Ciel]

and how old did you get married at?
i'm sorry, but i think people are very dumb to get married so young.
marriage has so much responsibility. it's not a toy, it's a real thing.
need to make commitment, it's a serious thing. i hate when people
think marriage is so easy to get by, but it's not.